Date: 08-31-05 - 12:50 am Title: Chapter One: Mission
I really have to say that I am thoroughly enjoying this story! The characters are layered and rich and real - something that's often lacking in fanfic. You have a real gift for conversation. It sounds easy and natural, and again, real. My favorite part of this is that I can so easily visualize what's happening, and their relationship takes a logical progression - which is what has me hooked! Please, keep going! ;)
Date: 08-27-05 - 12:50 pm Title: Chapter One: Mission
I love this story!
Date: 07-03-05 - 03:47 am Title: Chapter One: Mission
OM UPDATE PLEASE! This story got my interest. UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE! You really did a great job!
Date: 06-30-05 - 01:26 pm Title: Chapter One: Mission
Wow! Was storm shot? I am liking this story, please hurry and update. :D
Date: 06-30-05 - 03:47 am Title: Chapter One: Mission
Oooo I'm lovin' this story. You write characters really well -- from their dialogues to their thoughts to their actions. That Wolverine sure is a grumpy one, isn't he?
Date: 06-29-05 - 11:35 pm Title: Chapter One: Mission
You've caught my interest. I anxiously anticipate your next chapter :)
Date: 06-29-05 - 11:24 pm Title: Chapter One: Mission
Hmmm, I like what you've begun. I must say that I am curious as to what happens next. Update soon.
Date: 06-29-05 - 11:13 pm Title: Chapter One: Mission
nice but damn thats one hell of a clif hanger
Date: 06-29-05 - 11:11 pm Title: Chapter One: Mission
Hi and Welcome to RoLo Realm. This is much better. Hope to see more of your work soon. BTW checkout my work and comment.
Date: 06-29-05 - 11:10 pm Title: Chapter One: Mission
Ok, you've peaked my interest! What now? I have a very good feeling that this will be an intriguing story! Great 1st chapter!