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Male, 46 - firefighter, writer, artist
Categories: Ficlets/Songs/Poems
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 633 Read Count: 1972
Date: 03-24-13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Ya know, this is very profound and poignant. A deep steady at the inner workings of the human heart. Very nice.
W6C
Author's Response: Thank you W6C. I am sooo glad this has been well received. I appreciate your response, and thanks for reading. A A
Categories: Dramas
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7816 Read Count: 8238
Date: 03-23-13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Nice.
Had a little time to kill so I thought I'd come check out the RR Twitter thing and found this. Intriguing start... I was drawn to the "beginning of Kendall" plot... can't wait to see how this develops. Nice job so far. - W6C
Author's Response: I am HYPERVENTILATING! W6C reviewed my piece!
Date: 03-24-13 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Hmm... can't say I'm happy to hear Ro thinking about ways to harm her unborn child... but it's realistic in her mixed emotions and not wantin' her life to change over such a life-long unplanned event. Hope she starts to wonder about Logan's feelings in the situation... he has the right to know. But I'm sure Ororo will realize that herself. She's a good woman.
Nicely written and an easy read.
Thanks- W6C
Author's Response: I'm glad the mixed emotion thing is coming across as realistic and not too much! I was honestly worried about that... And she does consider his feelings, she's just wrapped up in the reality.
I am SO glad this isn't confusing because I have yet to figure out how to use italics without having it go over the entire piece. (Does that make sense? I only want italics for a small portion-like a thought.) THANK YOU FOR REVIEWING. SERIOUSLY.
Date: 03-24-13 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Wow. I have to say I really like the way you intertwine how Ororo reacts to questions outwardly and yet reveal her feelings, which often oppose her outward reaction, to us as you go along; without missing a beat or confusing the situation. Nicely done.
W6C
Author's Response: I am so glad the thoughts are translating properly. I wanted them in italics but can't figure out how to do that, nor do I have the patience to spend time trying to figure out how.
Update Day in the Park. It was seriously the first fic I read on this site and it holds a special place in my heart.
THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW.