Summary: A tempestuous confrontation leads two x men to a startling realization.
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Comedy, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 50160 Read Count: 86194
Member Since: 08-08-09
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[Report This] Published: 07-27-10 Updated: 06-25-14
Reviewer: elise50 Signed
Date: 05-30-11 Title: Chapter 13: A Heart Betrayed
Date: 05-30-11 Title: Chapter 13: A Heart Betrayed
I'm slowly coming into the community and starting to comment a few of the RoLo stories here. I've got to say this one is so great; it pulls out tons of emotions from the reader (at least for me) and I just love how it everything started off with a dog :)
I do have to admit though, especially after an Ororo v. Jean debate with a friend on FB (I know lol) that reading this section ripped my heart to shreds.
I'm actually really interested in seeing how you pull Ororo and Logan back together (if that's what you've got planned). Logan's gotten himself into a situation that seems almost impossible to fix (as much as I love the guy, he gets the majority of the blame in my book). He has to find a way to get Ororo to trust him again while allowing her to heal and deal with the all thats happened on her own terms; it's just a big mess :/ But you've pieced together a compelling story so far, I have no doubt you'll get everything on its right path by the end of your story. And I am looking forward to it :)
Author's Response: elise, Thank you so much for taking the time to read and write such an insightful review. Glad you found the realm and that you are using your writing talent here. Please keep writing and I hope you will continue to read and review. Hope this story continues to entertain you and draw out all of the emotions I try to express. Just don\'t hate me for that. :) AngelAloft
Summary: Logan's children come to the mansion for a visit while AU Wolvie takes care of a threat. Obviously an AU story that includes all of Logan's children from every AU I could think of.
Categories: General, General
Characters: None
Genres: Comedy, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13721 Read Count: 14194
Categories: General, General
Characters: None
Genres: Comedy, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13721 Read Count: 14194
[Report This] Published: 11-26-10 Updated: 01-06-13
Reviewer: elise50 Signed 
Date: 05-18-11 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Date: 05-18-11 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I'm catching up with RoLo stories and I just wanted to say that I love this! It's so great reading Logan's interact with his tribe of children lol. I love how you've got down each of their characters and how everyone else is reacting to them. I especially love little Kendall, she is too adorable for words.
I can't wait to see what you have coming next. Thanks for your wonderful writing :)
Author's Response: Glad to have you on board the RoLo bandwagon, Elise. I\'m glad you enjoyed my little story so far. The li\'l darlins are my favorite - it might be the \"daddy\'s little girl\" syndrome. lolol I also enjoy writing the two oldest boys as well. I still have one child yet to introduce and he\'s goin\' to have Logan running... and chuckling, I hope. :) Thanks for your time. - W6C
Summary: An accidental discovery of a drug that triggers a second evolution in mutants finds its way into the Xavier School For Gifted Youngsters. Ororo risks her life to save them from what may be the most dangerous mutant they've ever encountered...herself.
Categories: NC-17, General
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Angst, Comedy, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Sexual Situations, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19668 Read Count: 5569
Categories: NC-17, General
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Angst, Comedy, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Sexual Situations, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19668 Read Count: 5569
[Report This] Published: 06-02-11 Updated: 08-11-11
Reviewer: elise50 Signed
Date: 06-08-11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: 06-08-11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Oh this is interesting; everyone's roles are switched up. It should be fun to see how everything comes together and whose relationships are true, especially now that Ororo's been drugged.
Summary: Both a little scared/Neither one prepared/Beauty and the Beast
Categories: Ficlets/Songs/Poems, General
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1179 Read Count: 1460
Categories: Ficlets/Songs/Poems, General
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1179 Read Count: 1460
[Report This] Published: 06-07-11 Updated: 06-07-11
Reviewer: elise50 Signed
Date: 06-08-11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: 06-08-11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Your separating of Wolverine and Logan would pretty cool. They were both different, yet the same, at least in their love for Ororo. This was a great read :)
Summary: *Revised/Reposted* Two of our X-men get married in the most unconventional way!
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25537 Read Count: 19045
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25537 Read Count: 19045
[Report This] Published: 06-07-11 Updated: 06-25-11
Reviewer: elise50 Signed
Date: 06-08-11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: 06-08-11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I'm not sure if I ever read the original, but I do love this. Though I do feel a little bad for Forge, Ororo and Logan are just too amazing together. I definitely love the way Ororo is just as carnal as Logan.
Can't wait to see where the rest of the story's headed :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing elise. I didn\'t want to dog Forge out too badly in this version, though now that I think about it I didn\'t dog him out at all in the other version...lol, but anyone who stands in the way of my RoLo will have to get some kind of smack down *evil grin*.
Reviewer: elise50 Signed
Date: 06-15-11 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Date: 06-15-11 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Oh! While I kind of get where 'Ro is coming from, I'm not too sure her rash decision to leave like (especially with Forge) was the smartest idea. I'm so intrigued by this, I can't wait to see where it ends up.
Author's Response: \'Ro\'s upset, she\'s entitled. Storm/Ororo is always written (in fanfics as well as comics) to be the regal woman of reason. always turning the other cheek, the mother figure. This time I\'m gonna let her be a brat. Oh and if she didn\'t make it clear enough in the story; Forge is nothing more than a ride; a means to an end. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Summary: Can you really die of a broken heart?
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1667 Read Count: 1967
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1667 Read Count: 1967
[Report This] Published: 06-14-11 Updated: 06-14-11
Reviewer: elise50 Signed
Date: 06-15-11 Title: Chapter 1: Death by a Broken Heart
Date: 06-15-11 Title: Chapter 1: Death by a Broken Heart
Oh this was definitely heartbreaking; but good.
You know I always wondered if he'd really die like that.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it. :)
I honestly don\'t think he\'d let a lot go by him when it comes to her. The death of her would end up the death of him because they are too close.
Summary: Ororo had a job to do and falling in love with a marked man wasn't one of them. Unfortunately, things do not go as planned.
Categories: General, NC-17
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11396 Read Count: 2867
Categories: General, NC-17
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11396 Read Count: 2867
[Report This] Published: 06-25-11 Updated: 04-22-12
Reviewer: elise50 Signed
Date: 06-27-11 Title: Chapter 1: Lies begets her
Date: 06-27-11 Title: Chapter 1: Lies begets her
If that's them on first meeting & out in an open area, I can't wait to see what the interview's going to be like!
Ororo's doomed lol
Summary: The title should give it away, and I can't think of a summary for it.
Categories: Ficlets/Songs/Poems
Characters: None
Genres: Comedy, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2851 Read Count: 1757
Categories: Ficlets/Songs/Poems
Characters: None
Genres: Comedy, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2851 Read Count: 1757
[Report This] Published: 06-25-11 Updated: 06-25-11
Reviewer: elise50 Signed
Date: 06-27-11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: 06-27-11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I really really loved this! The concept was great, having the Wolverine pursing Ororo like that. Who knew he was such a gentlemen? Heck I want a Wolverine of my own :)
