Penname: Marbles [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: 02-16-11
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Note: I go by lychee loving on Fanfiction(dot)net and Archiveofourown(dot)org (Marbles was my previous pen name, whoops) So don't freak out if you see some of my work on those sites!!
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Prodigal by babs Rated: 18 Liked [Reviews - 29]
Summary: You can never step in the same river twice.
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16455 Read Count: 25065
[Report This] Published: 03-10-13 Updated: 08-12-13
Reviewer: Marbles Signed
Date: 04-20-13 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

What did she dooooo oh my goodness. I rarely enjoy soap opera levels of drama in fic (because if I wanted that I would actually watch a soap opera you know?) but I am enjoying this a lot! Probably because it does not feel as over-the-top.

BUT you asked for questions so I'm going to ask questions! 1) What caused Ororo to leave? 2) Why did she have such a hard time returning? 3) What did Charles die of :( 4) Why is Logan involved in this at all, why isn't he just up and leaving the mansion until the drama blows over?

Inquiring minds wish to know!

Author's Response: GOTCHA! I SHALL RESPOND TO THEM AS BEST AS I CAN! Thanks, by the way. I appreciate someone giving me a better direction lmao. And please tell me when this starts to feel too, too much (y'know what I mean?)

Summary: literally writing the summary would give away everything. But trust-- it's good.
Categories: Dramas
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7816 Read Count: 8229
[Report This] Published: 03-20-13 Updated: 04-19-13
Reviewer: Marbles Signed Liked
Date: 03-19-14 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh god how did I ever not read this before? This is simply worded and intimately sweet because of it. I love it so far, and I'm only three chapters in. I had to pause to review because this chapter is so so so wonderful, especially because it just feels like something that could and would happen (and not, as Ororo points out in her introspection, like what happens on TV. Gahhhh. Gah. I CAN'T WORDS. I love this. This is great.)

Reviewer: Marbles Signed Liked
Date: 03-19-14 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Ahhh, my heart. Ow. That was painful to read. I couldn't decide if I wanted to smile at the mental picture of a tiny Ororo climbing into Charles' lap, or cry at all this imagery of the sun setting and Ororo being so convinced that everything is going to go terribly. (and that's realistic isn't it? that reaction, to have a hard time finding the strength to have faith in the people she loves and trusts.)

I hope this isn't the end! I hope you have more. I normally don't like teenager!AUs like this, but this is just written so honestly and simply and thoughtfully that I can't help but love it all the more. I know it's close to a year since last update, but I'll wait for however long it takes! Since this is the best RoLo I've read on the Realm in a long time!

In All LIkelihood by babs Rated: 18 Liked [Reviews - 47]
Summary: Opposites don't attract, but sometimes glitches in the system pair them up. Who knew online dating could sometimes work?
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 27525 Read Count: 15736
[Report This] Published: 10-03-13 Updated: 01-11-14
Reviewer: Marbles Signed Liked
Date: 10-15-13 Title: In All LIkelihood

Oh, this was nice! They've been at each other's throats so long, and I was worried that you might jump to them being friends. But my worry was misplaced! This had the right amount of awkward and your basic "Okay so maybe I think you're attractive as *** and maybe I like you a little... but you still frustrate me like a lot!" and it was perfect, aha.

Keep it up! :) And I maintain that you don't have a pressing need for a beta. But if you ever need one, feel free to drop me a line here or something? You can PM me via the profile page, I think. :o

Author's Response: lol I actually understand what you mean. Thank you for liking it! I was worried the amount of dialouge was overwhelming and the insight wasn't enough, but you're definitely giving me hope. Thanks- I can't all my errors in the review and I'm so embarrassed! I was gonna post four more chapters dry, but I'll just shoot them over to you. MAKE SURE YOU CHECK TODAY OR I'M GONNA POST ALL FOUR TOMORROW. So now there's guilt on you lol

Reviewer: Marbles Signed Liked
Date: 10-09-13 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

YES I am also so, so tired about dudes saving "their" girls. Thank you!

I am also so happy. My problem with a lot of Storm/Wolverine fic is that there are days that Storm is written as passive and hardly able to fight back. I love that she's putting up a hell of a fight here (but also that she still needs help!)

I loved this chapter. Excellent, excellent work all around!

Author's Response: RIGHT? It's the most annoying thing ever! Espcially when it Storm. She's a freaking goddess and can fight for herself! (But this is AU and it's impossible to fight two people at one time.) Thanks for the review! You're really amazing for being so kind!

Reviewer: Marbles Signed Liked
Date: 10-16-13 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

THIS IS CUTE oh man, I love it when Logan bro's it up with his... bros. And of course, Remy is as classy as ever! Ha. And that last text was adorable, what a perfect cliffhanger! Awesome, awesome job.

PS, I just checked my inbox and I see no chapters for beta'ing there!! Don't be a tease!

Author's Response: haha! I'm dying at your word choice! "bros it up." You know he can't be debonair all the time! And I'm no tease! I'm gonna send them to you in a timely fashion lol. Thanks for doing this!

X-Men- Beginnings by Gainee__X Rated: AO: Adults Only!!! Liked [Reviews - 13]
Summary: X-Men re-written through the eyes of a RoLoer. It happened in a flash. While the old man spoke of Magneto and mutants, Wolverine's eyes bore into the dark, turbulent gaze of the woman identified as Storm. He didn't know that moment would change his life forever. REPOST FROM GAINEEWOP!
Categories: NC-17
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Sexual Situations, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40445 Read Count: 24388
[Report This] Published: 06-02-14 Updated: 08-04-15
Reviewer: Marbles Signed Liked
Date: 06-02-14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Wolverine

This was (is) one of my favorite stories! I'm glad you're reposting (and updating?) this, and I'm really excited for what you have in store :)

The first scene in this chapter, with Ororo and her awakening powers, is beautiful but kind of makes me sad. In a perfect world we would have an Ororo: Origins movie and what you'd written sounds like it would be translate ridiculously well to the silver screen. Can you imagine the visuals it would give us, especially with CGI as it is now? Hollywood needs to wake up already, gosh :(

Author's Response: Marbles: Chapter 7 was an update. I hope to finish this and start on X2 and 3 soon! I will also be reposting The Brat Pack and Shatter so those can be completed! I won't move my completed fics, not yet! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Marbles Signed Liked
Date: 06-11-14 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Liberty Island

This story is a curious case of ostensibly knowing what's going to come next, but not really. So you're left with a weird feeling of, "I know what's coming next!... wait no I don't!" and now you can't wait to see how things have changed, and which things stay the same. (that some things stay the same kind of proves to me that Logan/Jean wasn't a required part of his character and it kind of chafes me that they made it such a huge thing in the movies hahahaaa)

I also like how this can be taken as pseudo-canon (until further notice), considering how DOFP ended haha.

Author's Response: That's the challenge of writing it as well, believe it or not. I have scenes I need to fill in the film blanks, but then movie scenes that are 100% necessary to rewrite, such as the Liberty Island scenes. There won't be much more to this one, since I'm basically writing a film. No, Jean/Logan was DEFINITELY not necessary out of the gate. But then, we're biased! Hehe, that was my thought too. DOFP made nothing AU!

Empire by Gainee__X Rated: AO: Adults Only!!! Liked [Reviews - 28]
Summary: Post-DOFPSPOLIERS After time-traveling to save the world from a destructive war, Wolverine wakes in 2023 to find the plan definitely worked.

The problem is, he's in 2023, with no memory after 1973 and he may not be prepared for everything he needs to learn.
Categories: NC-17, General
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13935 Read Count: 13594
[Report This] Published: 06-05-14 Updated: 08-05-15
Reviewer: Marbles Signed Liked
Date: 06-05-14 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Ahh, how exciting! I've been toying with the idea of a post-DoFP fic myself but words are so hard. I know you'll do the concept justice though, so I'm really looking forward to reading this! :)

Author's Response: Words are hard. I really hope I can do this justice. Its RoLo, how can anyone resist?!

Reviewer: Marbles Signed Liked
Date: 06-05-14 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Memory

Gah. I am loving the twist here. I like how they were all preparing for this to happen, that they knew it would happen (it makes sense that they would pinpoint a year and try to anticipate Logan's... reverting? something?)

That said, twins! Named Laura and Anna-Marie! Be still my heart, that's really cute and I already like them both (and it's great they have distinct personalities already.)

What a cliffhanger though! This thing about another man replacing the Logan that had been husband to Ororo, father to their twins has me super hooked. Can't wait to see how things turn out!

Author's Response: Well, if Charles knew...why would he let 'Ro and the others just be blindsided. Not cool. I've been dying to start this forever and chapter two is almost complete, look for an update today or tomorrow. Yeah, I've got some aces up my sleeves...brace yourself. All I'm sayin'

Reviewer: Marbles Signed Liked
Date: 06-06-14 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Rapport

I thought the same thing re: Ororo and Logan hooking up at least once (at the very least!) in the Bad Timeline. No matter what's waiting for Logan in the new and restored timeline, I think that considering Logan, Storm, Charles and Erik showed up together on the Blackbird just implies that it'd been just them for a while. And the way Logan puts it here ("Wasn’t roses and moonlight, ‘Ro. It was war, it was sex, it was something to get us through the night.”), is something I think really could've happened.

(tl;dr I liked that part, but it was also a punch right in the feelings, ow. the end to this chapter didn't help at all and 'roro must just be struggling so much and while that's terrible, I also think it's a neat way to show her strength of character.)

The staff all getting together and gossiping is cute. And heartwarming, considering how they couldn't do even that in the previous timeline. And haha, how ironic that Kitty's the one most vocal about not wanting to hear about that life, considering she's the one who made Logan's mission at all possible!

(I'm sorry, I ramble a lot when I review something I really like! D:)

Author's Response: Oh, I completely agree. there was something there, like they were the last two teams standing. I love that aspect. Logan has his way with words every now and then. I know, right in the feels, huh? I can't wait for Kitty to find out what her purpose was and how much she went through to send him back! I'm so glad you're enjoying my fic!

Northern Lights by Gainee__X Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 7]
Summary: Repost/Update from Gaineewop (Sequel to Fade) It's been a wild ride. Twenty years together and they've settled. Never tamed, never complacent...but settled. Now, as their children come into their own, Storm and Wolverine are once again faced with the dangers of being mutants. And this time, they have a good deal more to lose.
Categories: General, NC-17
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Angst, Comedy, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Character Death, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22599 Read Count: 6536
[Report This] Published: 06-05-14 Updated: 06-05-14
Reviewer: Marbles Signed Liked
Date: 06-06-14 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Tempest

DAKEN

'TEMPEST"

HANK AND TRISH HAVING A LITTLE ONE

I can't decide if you're going to give me a heart attack because of cute things, awesome things or traumatizing things. I'm starting to believe that it'll be all three or something.

(just the existence of Daken and how he exists in this particular story is making me want to yell a lot holy crap haha)

Author's Response: You're so fun, Marbles. I love reading your reviews. Oh, yes. Daken has a large part to play!

Shatter by Gainee__X Rated: AO: Adults Only!!! Liked [Reviews - 4]
Summary: (Post X-3) Mourning for loves lost, Ororo Munroe and the mutant known as Wolverine must ban together or lose everything they have left. Repost/Update from Gaineewop
Categories: General, NC-17
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Character Death, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44081 Read Count: 16123
[Report This] Published: 06-05-14 Updated: 06-06-14
Reviewer: Marbles Signed
Date: 06-08-14 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Scream

I had to reread from the top because it's been a while, but I finally caught up!

What bothered me most about this story on my initial read-through of this was that I had a hard time picturing Ororo/Scott as being a thing, even if it was a onesided unrequited thing. They didn't strike me that way! Upon further reflection, if the movies expected us to believe that Logan was completely and totally In Love with Jean after barely knowing her, I found that Ororo loving Scott quietly and secretly to be easier to believe haha.

I also hated how Logan treated Ororo's "dirty little secret", because wow he has absolutely no right to talk to her that way after how he flaunted his attraction for Jean in Scott's face :( So I'm kind of in Storm's camp for this (tbh I'm usually in Ororo's camp. Team 'Ro ftw.), and I'm curious to see where this goes in terms of their relationship. A few chapters ago she was ready to tear him a new one, so I'm hoping to see some light shed on how that has changed/will continue to change.

Also, Kitty and Warren are adorable in this. As are Betsy and Piotr, haha. But I think the true challenge here is for you to make me believe that Forge won't be better for Ororo in this story (hopefully without vilifying him!) because dang if you didn't make him super likable and awesome and competent and sexy all at once...!!

Author's Response: God, I know. Forge took on a life of his own and we haven't seen the last of him yet. Logan pissed me off in that scene, man. I wanted to stab him. Don't worry, I've got a plan. Be prepared for a gigantic time-lapse! I promise, no villifying Forge, I love him too much.

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Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
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Warnings: None
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Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01-01-70 Updated: 01-01-70
Reviewer: Marbles Signed Liked
Date: 05-19-19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It's been so so long since I've been on this site, I'm so glad to see a new story here! I've missed RoLo, this really hits the spot. Intense but not lacking in depth: Logan's insistense on making sure she was in right mind when she said things he hoped to hear from her was REALLY great to read. :)

I really liked this, thank you for sharing!