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Reviewer: dispatcher652 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09-10-12 - 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 4

Really enjoying this. :) I like playful Scott and Ororo. So glad that he comes to Ororo's defense faster than he comes to Jean's.
I love Logan and Ororo's connection. How they reach each other on a primal level and that his feral is soothed by just her scent.
And good for Ororo for calling Jean out like that when she called Logan an animal.
Now you got my courosity peeked with who this mysterious stranger could be and what their connection to Ororo could be.

Author's Response: I come back to the stranger not the next chapter but after that. So don't freak out the next chapter I post, and you might hate me afterwards. *covers eyes* But I figured ya need drama to appreciate what you have. I am glad you like the story though! Thank you! Jade

Reviewer: Britt1990 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-10-12 - 12:50 am Title: Chapter 3

I like this story, but I'm alittle confused those Logan want Ro and Jean, what? I need to understand this story.

Author's Response: Logan is struggling with his intense feelings for Ro and thinking he isn't good enough. He is also afraid she brings out his feral. While he just likes jean b/c his feral does not react to her and he's physchially attracted to her. He almost wants to use Jean as a buffer so he doesn't fall deeper with Ororo. I will add another chapter, and see if it becomes more clear. Thank you for the review! Jade

Reviewer: dispatcher652 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-09-12 - 01:46 am Title: Chapter 1

I like this beginning so far and how there was an instant attraction between Logan and Ororo. I also like the brother and sister aspect of Scott and Ororo as well as the the father daughter relationship of Charles and Ororo. I love stories where they actually act like a family and that deep bond they have shows.

Author's Response: Thanks! I know you can be a family without being actually related and think they would have that type of dynamic after being together for so long! I have six chapters so far so I will post another now. Prepare for drama soon! :) haha Jade

Reviewer: Girlwonder Signed [Report This]
Date: 09-08-12 - 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 2

Omg two updates in one day I'm going to get spoiled!

Author's Response: Hee hee! I know right! I will post two tomorrow!!

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