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Reviewer: AngelAloft Signed [Report This]
Date: 10-13-13 - 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

I got a little free time, so I ran to read my Rolo. So happy I got to start reading this. Wonderful story and even though I'm outta time I'm gonna sneak in another chapter. (smile) A A

Reviewer: MadameVega Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-11-13 - 08:34 am Title: Chapter 1

Hello. Your story is very interesting and I am curious to see how it goes....a sugestion though if I could.

Watch your capitalization and punctuation. I am not trying to be a grammar Nazi(trust me) but it can make it really hard to read. Simply capitalization fixes like capitalizing everyone's first names in dialog "I'm pregnant, yes Logan is the father." not "Im pregnant yes logan is the father"....If you are a very young author maybe invest in a BETA, someone to proof read your work before you post it.

One author to another you do have talent you should put it to full use. Happy Writing! -Vega

Reviewer: punkin Signed [Report This]
Date: 07-03-13 - 02:38 am Title: Chapter 1

Absolutely love your new story.

Reviewer: Beautiful Storm Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-25-13 - 02:42 am Title: Chapter 1

Lol, loved Scott's confusion. Now where's the father to be off to? Is Sabretooth coming in?

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