Date: 10-13-13 - 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
I got a little free time, so I ran to read my Rolo. So happy I got to start reading this. Wonderful story and even though I'm outta time I'm gonna sneak in another chapter. (smile) A A
Date: 07-11-13 - 08:34 am Title: Chapter 1
Hello. Your story is very interesting and I am curious to see how it goes....a sugestion though if I could.
Watch your capitalization and punctuation. I am not trying to be a grammar Nazi(trust me) but it can make it really hard to read. Simply capitalization fixes like capitalizing everyone's first names in dialog "I'm pregnant, yes Logan is the father." not "Im pregnant yes logan is the father"....If you are a very young author maybe invest in a BETA, someone to proof read your work before you post it.
One author to another you do have talent you should put it to full use. Happy Writing! -Vega
Date: 07-03-13 - 02:38 am Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely love your new story.
Date: 06-25-13 - 02:42 am Title: Chapter 1
Lol, loved Scott's confusion. Now where's the father to be off to? Is Sabretooth coming in?