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Reviewer: QTFic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-12-10 - 02:26 am Title: Ch. 4 - The Calming Storm pt 3

OMG! This is heart breaking!

Author's Response: I'm sorry if it upsets you, but I am glad that it illicits such a response. :) Thank you for reading the story and for the feedback. I'm trying to get chapter 31 completed and posted - hopefully before you get there. lol - W6C

Reviewer: Linda Gagne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-11-10 - 04:41 pm Title: Ch. 4 - The Calming Storm pt 3

There are no words for what they did to Logan... You definitely have me calling those people bastards.. The story flows so well, the tramatic events so real to me the reader, I even teared up reading this I felt so bad for Logan and to end it with "can I have the visor back?" was so powerful to the story cause he just wants to be without pain or hurt again....

Author's Response: Yep, at that point that's all he's focused on. I'm glad you can feel the emotions in the chapter. Thanks for the FB, Linda - W6C

Reviewer: Jubes2681 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-01-06 - 12:41 am Title: Ch. 4 - The Calming Storm pt 3

Ah, one of my favorite moments: Can I have the visor back? Just fantastic! I really enjoy the psychological spin you did with this story - it's usually the other way around, meaning Ororo is tortured. It's just cool to see someone do the same thing to Logan and actually pull it off.

J/T

Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much, Traci... I love the psychological thriller aspect o' this story... I really thought it'd be too heavy to be accepted by the readers but the feedback since it's inception has been tremendous. I know whatcha mean, I see alot o' fics that portray everyone else as needin' rescuin' an' totally ignore the fact that this guy's whole history is based in needin' "to be rescued". I'm glad I could make it "real" and believable enough to be accepted. Thanks again. --- W6C

Reviewer: Lyger Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-01-06 - 01:07 am Title: Ch. 4 - The Calming Storm pt 3

This was a very hard story to read to think of the pain that Logan had to endure grips one's very soul. The worst part is we only have to look in our on history books to find monsters just like those in your story that would inflict such pain and suffering on another person. I can imagine how i must sound, but i can have compashion for Logan for what he had to endure no vone should.

Author's Response: That's exactly what I drew from; history. Repeatedly throughout history a certain group of people always seem to be targeted by unscrupulous people. --- W6C

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