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Reviewer: Linda Gagne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-11-10 - 05:27 pm Title: Ch. 5 - The Calming Storm, pt 4

My heart is breaking you have me hooked and what the heck are they gonna do.... It seemed he was just figuring they weren't gonna hurt him... my reaction was the same as ororo's at the end

Author's Response: Good :) Then that means I got the reactions as real as I possibly good. Thanks. - W6C

Reviewer: Jubes2681 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-01-06 - 12:46 am Title: Ch. 5 - The Calming Storm, pt 4

Storm should've fried their butts. Nuff said.

J/T

Author's Response: LOLOL.... well there's plenty o' chapters to come yet, I'm sure she'll fry somebody before it's over. *chuckles* --- W6C

Reviewer: Lyger Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-01-06 - 05:16 am Title: Ch. 5 - The Calming Storm, pt 4

Excellent story you can feel Logan fear,confusion,pain, anger and need for understanding and his instinct to protect Ororo. And Ororo's desire to help Logan, she can see and feel the pain, sorrow, confusion she knows Logan is in pain and scared an has to help the une she loves.

Author's Response: I'm glad you can feel all the emotions stirred up in this story. Thanks for the feedback. --- W6C

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