[Report This]Date: 12-13-10 - 01:18 am Title: Ch. 30 - The Pursuit of Weapon X, pt 1
No need to thank me, thank you for such an awesome story and giving me something to read as I am stuck home this weekend with pink eye...a testament to your great skills, though, that I read all of this with only one good eye!! :o)
To answer your question, what originally drew me in was first the dynamic between Logon and Storm. The tension of them both being unsure of the what the other was feeling for the other but the obvious deep feelings between them. After that it was the fact that I just fell in love with the characters and also as I mentioned before your research and attention to details show that you truly put a lot of care and thought into this story! Again kudos! I can’t wait for your next update!!
Author's Response: Thanks again! I'm glad all of the extra attention makes the difference. I know it did for me but it sure is nice to know it was worth it for the reader too. Thank you for taking the time to detail what caught your interest. I really appreciate it. - W6C
[Report This]Date: 12-13-10 - 12:11 am Title: Chapter 31, The Pursuit of Weapon X, pt 2
Wow so much I want to say about this fiction. Your depiction of all of the characters is so real. I was immediately drawn into this story! Also all of your extra research was amazing. You have a true gift my friend.
OK I'm going to sound like a greedy little kid but can I have some more please...like soon!!! Maybe some more sweetness soon between Logan and 'Ro...I know that will be a while down the road since Logan is on the run, but I can hardly wait. Great job!!
Author's Response: Wow, I can't believe you read 31 chapters in 24 hours. I'm totally astounded. lol I'm glad .. no, I'm thrilled that you liked it so much. I must admit though I'm eager to know what really drew you into it so deeply. But I do appreciate that you let me know that you read it and how you feel about it. Thank you very much. And Ch 32 is in progress as we speak. Hoping to have it out soon. Thanks again QTFic - W6C
[Report This]Date: 12-12-10 - 02:26 am Title: Ch. 4 - The Calming Storm pt 3
OMG! This is heart breaking!
Author's Response: I'm sorry if it upsets you, but I am glad that it illicits such a response. :) Thank you for reading the story and for the feedback. I'm trying to get chapter 31 completed and posted - hopefully before you get there. lol
- W6C
[Report This]Date: 11-29-10 - 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 31, The Pursuit of Weapon X, pt 2
Any plans to finish this story, I had been enjoying it
Author's Response: There sure are. My schedule is hectic so I've been rather slow on updating all my works in progress but they ARE being worked on. Next chapter of Eye is at 4 pages presently and I intend to try to get it finished and posted by the new year which is only four weeks away lolol
I do thank you for readin' Eye and I appreciate you lettin' me know that you've enjoyed it. - W6C
[Report This]Date: 11-08-10 - 03:54 am Title: Ch. 16 - A Feral Repose, pt 5
I am still enjoying Logan learning from Ororo and seeming to enjoy her company in such a romantic way. Even when Storm came about he trusted his senses knowing she was still Ororo.
Love his curiosity and that he claimed Ororo as his, that is also romantic.... Love the detail of him meeting his old friends, I was able to picture everything that was taking place including the facials that Logan would have in the situation. He found his friends again and it was a special showcasing of how careful his friends were willing to be to gain his trust again.
Author's Response: His friends are awesome people and they deserve their moments to showcase their own attributes. It's quite a balancing act to not forget anyone... like poor Jubilee... she simply vanished in the story cuz after her scenes there was little for her to do. My bad, but she deserved to be seen in a story about her favorite XMan - Wolvie. - W6C
[Report This]Date: 11-04-10 - 04:00 am Title: Ch. 15 - A Feral Repose, pt 4
very tender chapter...Logan learning all over again like a child, Ororo patient and non waivering in her dedication to Logan. A smile came to my face when Logan kept getting distracted or taking off and then coming back.... I know someone so like that ... it is so cute.... The river scene had me tingling cause I know what I wanted them to do, but how it ended was just as lovely, a closeness that is warm and undying
Author's Response: You wanted them to do it and so did many other RoLoers lolol. Stay tuned. :) - W6C
[Report This]Date: 10-12-10 - 03:09 am Title: Ch. 14 - A Feral Repose, pt 3
It was good to see ororo get through to Logan on her hurt, but the memory so painful, so sad and I felt very bad for him. And wow, I could feel Logan's arousal to Ororo's touch you described it so well. So touching and scary for Logan where he may have been feeling for the first time again. Him not taking the tags and not liking her putting the chain around his neck seems to me that he may not want to remember because of the pain. Seems that Warren has some secrets of his own, but he doesn't have to be so mean about it. Can't to see what is next.... Thanks :)
Author's Response: *big grin* Now you're getting knee deep into the good stuff. Yep, Warren's got his own secrets, we'll find out about those later... keep reading, you'll get there. - W6C
[Report This]Date: 09-28-10 - 02:43 am Title: Chapter 31, The Pursuit of Weapon X, pt 2
Wow! Your writing style is wonderful! I love this story!
Please update soon! I would love to read more!
Author's Response: Hi Sofia, I am still working on the next chapters of this saga. I apologize that it takes me so long between postings. I wish I could write full-time and dedicate every waking moment to this... that would be so cool. Until then though, I can only apologize for the delays and say thank you very much for spending so much time reading this saga. I appreciate that. - W6C
[Report This]Date: 09-27-10 - 03:21 am Title: Ch. 13 - A Feral Repose, pt 2
Great continuence and build up to what is coming next for Logan... His friends working on convincing him to come back and what they need to do that while still giving more insight into Logan and his life and those around him... The set up with Sabertooth being told to observe Logan can only mean more bad to come for poor Logan... makes me wish they would just leave the poor guy alone to live his life normally. Thanks!
Author's Response: Well that's the thing that haunts Logan the most... that these people won't leave him alone to just live his life. :) - W6C
[Report This]Date: 09-14-10 - 01:37 am Title: Ch. 12 - A Feral Repose, pt 1
I like that we get to see Logan in the eyes of his friends.... Them remembering what he has to deal with daily to live his life..... I love the relationship of Ororo and Logan and her becoming aware that he invited her into HIS life in the wild... It is good in a way that he gets this time to be without knowledge of the pain he was in and what others did to him. I am not sure at this time if he should go back to humanity as he was abused horribly by them, but I look forward to this journey oh him and his friends... I love Gambit btw I think I can so empathize with how he is for sure.....
Author's Response: I"m glad you're learning to appreciate Gambit. He's a cool character. They all are, each in their own ways. - W6C
[Report This]Date: 09-13-10 - 03:06 am Title: Ch. 11 - In the Storm's Wake, pt 4
Logan truely has caring friends and thank goodness Ororo insisted he be released to the wild to recouperate.... Love the relationship Ororo and Logan have, a true connection, it's beautiful and refreshing. It is nice that Logan can feel safe with Ororo and she is dedicated to him. Great detailing with Logan and his abilities as well as his build...
Author's Response: Thanks Linda. I appreciate that you're still hanging in there with the story. Ro's awesome. - W6C
[Report This]Date: 09-12-10 - 04:34 am Title: Ch. 10 - In the Storm's Wake, pt 3
awwww, love how this chapter ended, but also enjoyed how Hank figured that poor Logan wasn't given the proper time for all healing and just cause his physical was healed doesn't mean his mind has recovered from all his tramatic experiences. Love Ororo standing up to them and convinced them not to sedate him again to let him feel his rage that he should be able to. Ohhh and charles' idea to use Gambit. Great explaining of his abilities too btw since I am not up to date on it, your detailing so far has really put me in this story fully. And what an ability to have, Empathy. Can't wait for Logan to feel the love in Ororo's heart, he so deserves it.
Author's Response: An amazing ability to have indeed - Empathy. I'm beginning to believe that most of the readers of this story have that gift. Thanks for the nice review. - W6C
[Report This]Date: 09-12-10 - 03:53 am Title: Ch. 9 - In the Storm's Wake, pt 2
Awesome look into logan's past and the hell he went through and goes though trying to control his "gifts" . It was good that you gave his friend insight to this as well... he deserves to feel safe....
Author's Response: Yeah he does, but he can still kick ass when he needs to. *grins* Trick here is to balance Logan's basic human needs and desires with his inner powers and the animal rage and instincts. He's a complex character that often is shown way too two-dimensional. It's been a trip writing this story. - W6C
[Report This]Date: 09-12-10 - 03:06 am Title: Ch. 8 - In the Storm's Wake, pt 1
Hank is feeling guilty and I am not sure if I feel he should or not, we will see later..... and again my heart is ripped out with the boy in charles mind.... His pleas, I just wanted to hold him and tell him I loved him and it would be ok.... I knew it was Logan as he was sedated or at least I think so. Logan feeling like he did as a child that no one wanted him and I cry another tear for them both..... This would make a great novel, it has all the qualifications for one, it makes you feel for the characters, places you in the middle of the action and makes you think ahead to what is going to happen next and hope your wishful outcome takes place (I hope anyway)
Author's Response: Child-Logan was a blast to write. Just having to sit back and contemplate putting him together... of course, Marvel ruined my whole image of the little pauper with Origins.... but I still prefer my own personal image of him as a child. I'm glad you did too. Thanks for the feedback on this chapter, it was fun to write. And we'll see more regarding what happened here in later chapters.... when I get back to writing chapter 32... sorry about that. - W6C
[Report This]Date: 09-12-10 - 02:22 am Title: Ch. 7 - The Calming Storm, pt 6
omg.... His pleas, I could never resist those pleas my heart was aching.... Ororo coming to comfort him to try and let him know he is safe, so heart wrenching... On to the next chapter loving this but it is sad
Author's Response: Great! :) I got the response from the reader I was hoping for. *grins* Thanks for sticking with this story. It's been an adventure of discovery for the writer as well. - W6C
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