The story is wonderful, as usual. your one of my favorite authors :) the only qualm I had with the whole thing was her speech. Shes five, not two. Update soon

Author's Response: I know, I de-aged her too much, but I was running on the assumption in my imagination that if she was tossed back and forth from different foster homes back into an orphanage, she wouldn't have the chance to go to school, and how much worse would her speech be if she was learning limited English, too. But you made a point. Glad you like the story.

dude. you write like insane well.

Author's Response: Okay, that review rocked! Thanks! I'm grinning, since I start many of my own phrases with "dude" myself in plain conversation. Thanks for reading, Nickel.

Great chapter ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I can't wait to read the next chapter so UPDATE SOON.


Author's Response: Thanks, Dragon. Still considering an update to Money Dance today. But I will work on this one again when I can.

You're right I did forget about this. It started off so well too so it's good you haven't forgotten it. I don't usually like stories with chidren in it but with the additon of Japheth and Everett it's fun. Now just where are you going with this?

Author's Response: It is still up in the air. I had a plot in my head to base this on a little-known fairy tale called "The Light Princess." Then the thought occurred to me that Windy's story "Bloodbonds" echoed the plot I was trying to build, so I will change it. Ororo won't be a child through too much more of this. She will run into Logan soon, in a simpler capacity.