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Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-28-07 - 02:10 pm Title: Finders, Keepers

yay! Logan is free roro

Author's Response: Yup, he's gonna free Ororo, but her adventure will have a way to go from there. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kathy.

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-18-07 - 12:28 am Title: Finders, Keepers

Those poor babies. I feel so bad for Ororo and Japheth. All she wants is her "dollie" and the evil Farouk provided what her heart desired. When will Logan gut that bastard and steal Ororo away? I can tell that you love writing for Victor. You do it so well.

I like that everyone's paths are finally crossing. I'm definitely intrigued.

Author's Response: Ororo will eventually find that Farouk and his ilk are evil, using what people want to control them. And yes, I adore Vic as a villain, and I tend to "humanize" him. He's another character I hear talking to me in his own voice when I imagine him. I have a Vic fic in the outline stages right now, but I don't know what to do with it. Glad you have read this so far, m'dear!

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-17-07 - 01:21 am Title: Finders, Keepers

It seems that 'Ro's doll is now careworn...how much time elapsed?Poor Jape, it's a wonder he didn't go back for help or try to get the orphanage on the tele. Logan and Charles, hmm, I wonder what their first meeting will be like. Good chapter!

Author's Response: Japheth didn't have the resources available when he decided to make his little trip, and no one looked out for him, which could easily be the case, since he was an orphan displaced from his family. I haven't decided much on how long it had been, likely a few months. Charles and Logan might not like each other much, but they will have a lot to talk about. Thanks for hanging out with me for this one, Burnz!

Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-16-07 - 06:55 pm Title: Finders, Keepers

Yay! An update! I'm loving this story and I really can't wait to see how this turns into a RoLo.

Author's Response: I'm still figuring that part out!!! Thanks for the review, Tiger!

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