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Reviewer: Roxxi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-16-07 - 12:42 am Title: Possession

I really want to see where this goes next.
Your stories always has rich detail and surprises that leaves the reader wanting more.

Author's Response: Wow. That's high praise, Roxxi, thanks! Now, if only I could figure out where this is going next...

Reviewer: darkhorse2763 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-10-07 - 05:07 am Title: Possession

more! more! i want more! i completely forgot about how much i love this story till i saw this update, and now i'm really excited to see where it's going to go and how it's going to develop. can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: More? I want to write more...darn writer's block! Glad you are enjoying this so far, DarkHorse. This was an odd story when I started it, and I don't have a crystal clear idea of how it will continue or end, but I'm enjoying the journey. Thanks for your review and nice words.

Reviewer: noir libra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-09-07 - 07:21 am Title: Possession

Holy heck, girl! That was fantastic. The part with Logan trying to get Ororo to go with him was great.
The scene with Charles and Farouck's battle was intense. So much description that the reader feels as if it is playing out before them.

Loved the update and thanks for the shout-out.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading, Libra. Glad you had the chance to peek at it and leave me feedback, which I love. I like the thought of Logan being a soft touch when the need calls for it. That skill might come in handy pretty soon.

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-08-07 - 08:06 pm Title: Possession

Man that was a great chapter. The drama...the violence...the drama! I liked it. Little 'Ro was a trip. (I do wonder what happened to Japheth) i am glad Chuck wasn't crippled this go around. Good job!

Author's Response: Japheth is waiting in the wings; he needs rescuing, too, but I'm still debating where he will end up, since Moira is still distraught that TWO kids were taken from the orphanage. Japheth's unique. Chuck's handicap isn't the main thing here for me; his past as someone who served in the military appeals to me as much as his life as a mutant. Guy's been through a lot. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: tigerstorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-08-07 - 03:26 pm Title: Possession

Only one thing I can say after this chapter... What happens next???

Author's Response: A whole lot of twisting and turning. Xavier and Logan aren't gonna be let off the hook so easily, even with Ororo safe.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-08-07 - 12:54 pm Title: Possession

Holy hot damn you write a frikkin good fic!! **squee** Your descriptions, emotions, characters and scenes are so well formed it's immediately entrancing--so much so that I felt jarred when I hit the end of the chapter. Brilliant!

Author's Response: Whee! This review just made me squeeeeeeeeeee! I'm glad you liked it. Heck, I'm glad ANYONE liked it after I let it sit for over two months before updating!!! Now that you've read my chapter, you can give me another one of yours, when your nonexistent free time allows it! Thanks for boosting my ego, Hobbins.

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