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Reviewer: Mystiqbard Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-13-11 - 10:32 pm Title: Watching

I've been nicely making my way through your mammoth story for inspiration to write again. It's been a great alternative to TV and you must be thanked for that!

By the way, Victor in the story? LOVE it. Hehehe

Author's Response: Sorry it's taken me so long to reply, woman. Thanks for the visit, and I'm glad you're enjoying it. "Mammoth" isn't far off the mark, this is one of my longer pieces, and it takes a lot of mental energy and Wiki references to keep me on track with this one. I love Victor, too, he's my favorite skeevy villain of all time.

Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-10-07 - 11:37 pm Title: Watching

wait, what did the letter say??? And I've heard of Maggot but I never knew that his real name was Japheth. That really sounded painful. But really I want to know what the letter said! Why is she asking him to come to New York? Not that I'm saying he shouldn't go, I just want to know why she's asking him to come. now.

And I always thought that Jean was older than Ororo for some reason... Ororo acts older, but Jean just seems older... does that make sense?

Author's Response: Charles is asking Logan to come, because he was one of the only people who could get through to her in the wake of what happened back in Cairo. There is a great bio on Japheth on Uncannyxmen.net that explains it well. Jean and Ororo are around the same age, I think, since Ororo's age was never detailed that much when she came to the team back in Uncanny Giant Sized 1. All I know is that characters like Nightcrawler and Piotr were between 19-21 when they joined, Sean was older, around his forties, and that Proudstar was old enough to drink. Jean might have been a little older than Ororo, but I wager they are the same age.

Reviewer: NoirLibra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-10-07 - 04:47 pm Title: Watching

You have to start the next chapter of this pronto. First Japheth and then Logan gets a plane ticket to New York...you can't leave me hanging.

I love Ororo's attitude in this. Can't wait to see what her reaction will be to Logan and vice versa.

Don't know if I've ever told you, but I love this story.

Author's Response: I love that you love it. And I always enjoy the feedback you give me. Ororo and Logan will be interesting to observe when they are in the same room together again. Thanks for visiting.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-10-07 - 06:35 am Title: Watching

Ohhh, Japheth's mutation just kicked in. Poor kid, I'd freak out, too, if some creatures would just erupt out of me without warning...
What's with the missing stuff? Is it Kevin's doing?
I like Ro's attitude here, heh :D She and Jean are going to be quite a handful LOL
Oohhh, will Logan be on his way to Westchester now? I can't wait for them to meet again. Will Ro remember him?
And what about Creed? Will he follow him?

Author's Response: The missing stuff got eaten! One of Japhet's "pets" were nibbling on his sandal, by way of brief explanation. I had fun writing that part... Ororo and Jean will get into mischief once in a while. I always like the Classic Xmen issue when they had ice cream and went shopping, when Ororo explained her claustrophobia. Creed and Logan will show up soon.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-10-07 - 12:05 am Title: Watching

Get him to New York!!

Author's Response: I'm working on it! Get me some more Crimson Shadows!

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-09-07 - 07:14 pm Title: Watching

How old is Ororo? I can’t wait to read the next chapter UPDATE SOON.

Author's Response: At this point, I think Ororo is about twenty-one. I will have to go back and check the timeline of the story, but when this started, she was about four or five. Thanks!

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-09-07 - 02:43 pm Title: Watching

Firstly let me say...you are evil. Now I will be wondering what the trip to see Ororo was about and wondering if Moira will find out what is going on with Japheth. Vic/Farouth still plaguing Logan...poor guy. I expect another update as soon as you can missy! What a way to leave a person hanging!! Good chapter. :D

Author's Response: I'm still trying to figure out what to do with Logan and Farouk in this. And I'm dying to write some more of Vic. And you knew I was evil...*peals off maniacal laughter and rubs hands, fetches Igor to find some brains (for me)*

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