Oh Man! I wonder if 'Ro will feel fear now. That's messed up. I had wondered if Farouk would take away Charles ability to walk so I see he did it with a physical blow this go around...and quite a viscous one at that. Eek!

Author's Response: Yup. It was inevitable, since Charles took away Farouk's physical form and limited him to only moving around through other people. Kinda ironic to me when I wrote it, but I was hoping to make it a little deeper. Eventually, perhaps. Thanks for weighing in, Burnz

Is this going to get better eventually? That's all I'd like to know. I know it says this won't be fluff, but better than Victor and Farouk being... weill themselves. And I have issues imagining Xavier walking around... I automatically picture him in his chair.

I actually like Jean in this (and her reaction to Scott was adorable). Ororo and Logan's conversations (can I even call them that?) are so much better!

Author's Response: Hee! I had fun writing the part with Jean and Scott. Scott was pretty young when he met Jean and the Professor in the books, just a teenager. I figured it wouldn't be too much different than that. Won't be fluff, but there will be lighter moments eventually. Particularly from Moira, once she and Charles are sharing the same roof...hope I didn't give away too much.

OMG! That was awesome. I can't wait for the next update.

Jean's reaction to meeting Scott was priceless.

Laughed out loud at Logan thinking "Hello, Mama" when he was staring at Ororo's breasts.

That Jean/Charles/Moira moment was intense. Fantastic, but intense. I couldn't imagine being privy to something like that. Especially Jean since she'd been through it before.

I love this story.

Author's Response: I want Jean to have layers and make readers identify with her more than just being someone Ororo competes with Logan for. And yes, I love the idea of Jean being the one to fall hard for Scott for a change, instead of the other way around. Thanks for the review, girl!