[Report This]Date: 02-07-08 - 01:11 am Title: The More Things Change
Arrgh! What a cliffhanger! Vic turning over a new leaf in the middle of a battle. Whoa. Great chapter. :)
Author's Response: Thanks. I like my villains to have more than one side to them. Makes it more shocking when he bites the dust. Thanks, kiddo.
[Report This]Date: 01-31-08 - 08:58 pm Title: The More Things Change
*blinks* Is he really dead? *cries* Damn, he grabbed 'Ro's wrist like that on purpose. He knew Logan would attack him. He wanted to die. Aww. *wants to hug Vic*
I'm glad we got to see the real him. An all around nice guy, before his stupid father messed him up. He's even sorry for what he was made to do by others who were too chicken shit to get their pretty hands dirty. Uhm... yeah, I love Vic. :D
What Jean did was awesome! I'm glad she was able to show him some light, warmth, give him his glow. :) That reminded me so much of the cool "Death Hunt" run with Sabes and Birdy. *loves* Good times. :D
So is Farouk's presence still floating around somewhere? Jean didn't destroy him, right? Just helped Vic kick him out of his head (which, again, was great!).
Uhm. I think I should say something non-Vic, too. LOL :D
Loved the moment 'Ro ran in on Scott and Jean "enjoying their tea". *snorts* That was great!
And yay for Charles being back in the game. Heavily injured, yes, but awake.
A heart wrenching chapter, Cee. For me anyways... LOL
P.S. Is he really dead? ;D
Author's Response: This was TOTALLY jacked from Death Hunt. I'm so glad you're as much of a fan of that Sabertooth arc as I am. That's when I started to love that character as a villain and as a mutant. Jean was his Birdy; I can't remember if Scott Lobdell did something like that, where Creed kept shouting at Jean to give him the glow after Birdy was killed? In Uncanny, or in adjectiveless X-men? That inspired me. Yup. Jean took away Creed's need to keep running on the rage that kept him alive for so many years. That's how Logan took him down. Yes, he's dead. Not forgotten, but dead. Sorry. I'll give him back to you in another fic, I promise!
[Report This]Date: 01-31-08 - 03:28 am Title: The More Things Change
You updated! I was beginning to think you'd forgotten about this story! *does the running man* I was starting to think I was going to have to stage a camp out on your LJ.
This chapter was chock full of awesomeness. There was romance, blood, guts and evil. I loved it.
*looks up with big doe eyes* Please ma'am, I'd like some more.
Author's Response: Romance, blood guts and evil. Yup. That was what I wanted to deliver with this one. I didn't forget about this story, but it's hard to juggle the usual, far too many that I have in progress. I need to just stop! Someone get the duct tape to tie down my hands before I start typing out a new fic!! I will bring more, I promise. I have a chapter that is about two thirds of the way through.
[Report This]Date: 01-30-08 - 08:51 pm Title: The More Things Change
attempt #2
I burst out laughing at "hanky panky". I kind of liked the scene between Vic, Jean and Farouk. It was interesting to see a vunerable side to him. I was expecting the slight gore, but I still made a face. Is Vic really dead? Will Farouk be back?
Author's Response: Yup. Vic's dead. That's okay, though, since there is plenty of evil left to go around in this story from Farouk, and from whomever else he possesses...oops. Gave that one away. And I love the term hanky panky. Stevie seemed like she was the one who should say it.
[Report This]Date: 12-09-07 - 03:44 pm Title: Hold You
I'm all caught up. Very interesting and well written story. I'm feening for the ROLO hotness to begin. :)
Author's Response: It'll begin soon. Well, sorta soon. Logan will be pretty busy, and she's still feeling him out for his connections to her past. But thanks!!
[Report This]Date: 11-25-07 - 11:32 pm Title: Hold You
thanks for the bit of sweetness Cee. I was wondering if he'd ever start telling her how he knows her. I'm not too worried about Charles yet. I'm more concerned for 'Ro. And Logan.
And thanks for ruinning V-Day for me lol
Author's Response: Yup. You're right to be concerned!!! At about this point in the Light Princess, which I based this on, Logan is getting ready to offer himself as a sacrifice. We'll see what happens.
[Report This]Date: 11-25-07 - 07:36 pm Title: Hold You
No wonder Ro keeps everyone at a distance all the time. It's safe. Don't get attached, don't get hurt. Damn, poor thing. I hope Logan's words - and Logan himself - will be able to get her to open up a bit.
Feb 14th? *snorts* Perfect! ;D Now is Vic really that sloppy or did he leave that trail on purpose? Can't wait to see what Logan's up to.
Oh my, Moira must go through hell. I'm glad Charles is able to communicate every once in a while.
Author's Response: On some level, she's protecting other people from the darkness lingering inside her, that she's not even fully aware of. She's tethered to Farouk, and again, it's hidden down deep. We'll see what happens next. Vic? Hmmmmm...*chuckle*. Moira will be there for Charles, but there's trouble coming her way, too.
[Report This]Date: 11-25-07 - 04:02 pm Title: Hold You
That had to be rough for 'Ro and Logan to go back to the time they met...as much as she could remember. Poor Moira seeing her love such a mess. It is good hat Jean could let her know he was thinking of her although I can understand why 'Ro would be a bit jealous. Nice to see that Charles is able to get out some form of communication. Now I wonder what Logan will do and if he took the time to actually plan something. Good chapter. :)
Author's Response: Ro's jealousy breaking through is the precursor to something else. Still don't know what... Jean won't remain unscathed for long, either. It's about to get fierce!
[Report This]Date: 11-25-07 - 03:44 pm Title: Can You Hear Me?
Oh Man! I wonder if 'Ro will feel fear now. That's messed up. I had wondered if Farouk would take away Charles ability to walk so I see he did it with a physical blow this go around...and quite a viscous one at that. Eek!
Author's Response: Yup. It was inevitable, since Charles took away Farouk's physical form and limited him to only moving around through other people. Kinda ironic to me when I wrote it, but I was hoping to make it a little deeper. Eventually, perhaps. Thanks for weighing in, Burnz
[Report This]Date: 11-15-07 - 08:08 pm Title: Can You Hear Me?
Love, love, love Ro! :D She keeps cracking me up. LOL Jean and Scott, hilarious! Loved her reaction to him, so cute.
Gads, and I love Victor! I'm so glad he's in this story so you can write him. :D Poor Charles though, don't get me wrong. ;) After this he won't be able to walk again, right? Vic did quite a number on him. Crazed psycho. *loves*
Oh, one more thing. When Logan thought "hello, mama" he sounded like Johnny Bravo in my head! Gads, I need help. LOL :D But it made me laugh, heh. Still does. *snorts*
Author's Response: I love Vic in all of his psycho ramblings, too. I always think of the guy roughing up Patricia Arquette in True Romance, or the icky bounty hunter in Raising Arizona. Guys like that come to mind in my head. Yeah, Logan sounding like Johnny Bravo...funny image.
[Report This]Date: 11-14-07 - 04:16 pm Title: Can You Hear Me?
Is this going to get better eventually? That's all I'd like to know. I know it says this won't be fluff, but better than Victor and Farouk being... weill themselves. And I have issues imagining Xavier walking around... I automatically picture him in his chair.
I actually like Jean in this (and her reaction to Scott was adorable). Ororo and Logan's conversations (can I even call them that?) are so much better!
Author's Response: Hee! I had fun writing the part with Jean and Scott. Scott was pretty young when he met Jean and the Professor in the books, just a teenager. I figured it wouldn't be too much different than that. Won't be fluff, but there will be lighter moments eventually. Particularly from Moira, once she and Charles are sharing the same roof...hope I didn't give away too much.
[Report This]Date: 11-13-07 - 01:21 am Title: Can You Hear Me?
This is a great story please continue writing it and post againg soon.
Author's Response: I will, I promise. I have another chapter that is about one third done. More angst but a little less violence...maybe.
[Report This]Date: 11-12-07 - 10:29 pm Title: Can You Hear Me?
OMG! That was awesome. I can't wait for the next update.
Jean's reaction to meeting Scott was priceless.
Laughed out loud at Logan thinking "Hello, Mama" when he was staring at Ororo's breasts.
That Jean/Charles/Moira moment was intense. Fantastic, but intense. I couldn't imagine being privy to something like that. Especially Jean since she'd been through it before.
I love this story.
Author's Response: I want Jean to have layers and make readers identify with her more than just being someone Ororo competes with Logan for. And yes, I love the idea of Jean being the one to fall hard for Scott for a change, instead of the other way around. Thanks for the review, girl!
[Report This]Date: 10-20-07 - 09:28 pm Title: These Dreams
Victor and Farouk are two sick individuals. I don't know what Farouk is planning for Ororo, but whatever it is I can't wait to read it.
I really love this story.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoy it. Thanks for reading and giving me feedback. Vic and Farouk are stirring up lots of trouble.
[Report This]Date: 10-13-07 - 05:52 pm Title: These Dreams
So she can't remember him at all. For now! That's gonna be interesting :) Loved his reaction when he met her again, dry mouth and all.
Uh oh, Vic's on his way! ... Wheee :D *rubs hands in excitement* Ahem... I mean OH NO! *mocks horror* Uhm, that wasn't really convincing, now was it? LOL
Author's Response: *chuckle* Boy, that Vic...he's gonna come in with a bang. Literally...
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