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Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-13-07 - 02:30 am Title: These Dreams

I Love it chapter 8 was great and I know chapter 9 will be even better so update soon.


Author's Response: You're more confident than I am! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Roxxibebe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-12-07 - 11:39 pm Title: These Dreams

God damn.

Author's Response: *grin*

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-12-07 - 10:26 pm Title: These Dreams

Hmm...what an odd girl is our 'Ro. Logan seems to be making quite the impression, I wonder what 'Ro will think once she fines out his purpose. Ugh Vic's coming.... Good chapter!

Author's Response: I love writing Vic, whether anyone wants to read about him or not! I'm odd that way. Ororo will develop slowly. There is something wrong with her that's hard to pin down. She will draw qualities out of Logan he doesn't know he even has.

Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-12-07 - 06:27 pm Title: These Dreams

Loved the reaction Logan had seeing 'Ro all grown up lol

Thank you for reminding me how much I don't like Farouk. This is going to be bloody isn't it?

Author's Response: Yup. Most likely. And Logan isn't his immediate target.

Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-10-07 - 11:37 pm Title: Watching

wait, what did the letter say??? And I've heard of Maggot but I never knew that his real name was Japheth. That really sounded painful. But really I want to know what the letter said! Why is she asking him to come to New York? Not that I'm saying he shouldn't go, I just want to know why she's asking him to come. now.

And I always thought that Jean was older than Ororo for some reason... Ororo acts older, but Jean just seems older... does that make sense?

Author's Response: Charles is asking Logan to come, because he was one of the only people who could get through to her in the wake of what happened back in Cairo. There is a great bio on Japheth on Uncannyxmen.net that explains it well. Jean and Ororo are around the same age, I think, since Ororo's age was never detailed that much when she came to the team back in Uncanny Giant Sized 1. All I know is that characters like Nightcrawler and Piotr were between 19-21 when they joined, Sean was older, around his forties, and that Proudstar was old enough to drink. Jean might have been a little older than Ororo, but I wager they are the same age.

Reviewer: NoirLibra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-10-07 - 04:47 pm Title: Watching

You have to start the next chapter of this pronto. First Japheth and then Logan gets a plane ticket to New York...you can't leave me hanging.

I love Ororo's attitude in this. Can't wait to see what her reaction will be to Logan and vice versa.

Don't know if I've ever told you, but I love this story.

Author's Response: I love that you love it. And I always enjoy the feedback you give me. Ororo and Logan will be interesting to observe when they are in the same room together again. Thanks for visiting.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-10-07 - 06:35 am Title: Watching

Ohhh, Japheth's mutation just kicked in. Poor kid, I'd freak out, too, if some creatures would just erupt out of me without warning...
What's with the missing stuff? Is it Kevin's doing?
I like Ro's attitude here, heh :D She and Jean are going to be quite a handful LOL
Oohhh, will Logan be on his way to Westchester now? I can't wait for them to meet again. Will Ro remember him?
And what about Creed? Will he follow him?

Author's Response: The missing stuff got eaten! One of Japhet's "pets" were nibbling on his sandal, by way of brief explanation. I had fun writing that part... Ororo and Jean will get into mischief once in a while. I always like the Classic Xmen issue when they had ice cream and went shopping, when Ororo explained her claustrophobia. Creed and Logan will show up soon.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-10-07 - 12:05 am Title: Watching

Get him to New York!!

Author's Response: I'm working on it! Get me some more Crimson Shadows!

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-09-07 - 07:14 pm Title: Watching

How old is Ororo? I can’t wait to read the next chapter UPDATE SOON.

Author's Response: At this point, I think Ororo is about twenty-one. I will have to go back and check the timeline of the story, but when this started, she was about four or five. Thanks!

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-09-07 - 03:53 pm Title: Sins of Our Mothers and Fathers

i think you're single handedly keeping the realm alive right now.

Author's Response: shoot, I wish...no one's around to play with, since everyone's in school. I wanna read more updates! Thanks for visiting.

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-09-07 - 02:43 pm Title: Watching

Firstly let me say...you are evil. Now I will be wondering what the trip to see Ororo was about and wondering if Moira will find out what is going on with Japheth. Vic/Farouth still plaguing Logan...poor guy. I expect another update as soon as you can missy! What a way to leave a person hanging!! Good chapter. :D

Author's Response: I'm still trying to figure out what to do with Logan and Farouk in this. And I'm dying to write some more of Vic. And you knew I was evil...*peals off maniacal laughter and rubs hands, fetches Igor to find some brains (for me)*

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-30-07 - 06:49 pm Title: Sins of Our Mothers and Fathers

Ohhhh, more please! I'm enjoying this story immensely!
"Ororo big girl". Logan and Charles getting her out of Farouk's filthy hands. Moira and Kevin. Teenage Ro running around all naked... and not to forget Vic! He's a riot LOL! I love how you write him with all his freakyness :) *loves*
Can't wait to see what's next with Farouk waiting patiently in the background. The first meeting after all those years between Ro and Logan is another thing I'm anxiously looking forward to.

Author's Response: *grin* I love writing Vic. I don't know why. He's been showing up in my stories more often lately, sneaky devil that he is. Farouk is up to no good, darn him! Logan won't be able to believe his eyes. Ororo's reaction will be interesting. Thanks for reading, Steph.

Reviewer: irish_sunset Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-08-07 - 11:50 am Title: Sins of Our Mothers and Fathers

LOL! This update was wonderful. Laughter and antics. I'm really excited about Ro's emotional development.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked this. Ororo's going to be a work in progress. So will Logan, eventually. THanks for reading.

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-04-07 - 12:48 pm Title: Sins of Our Mothers and Fathers

Kevin is a handful in a scary way and 'Ro is in a sad and shocked kind of way. All three children old beyond their years. Good going. :)

Author's Response: Ororo's little quirk in her personality will be explained soon. She won't just be running around naked and naive for the rest of the story, I promise. It has something to do with fear... Kevin is going to also play a bigger role soon, particularly due to the nature of his powers and the threat he poses to Moira, or anyone close to her. Stay tuned. And I appreciate the review.

Reviewer: tigerstorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-04-07 - 04:38 am Title: Sins of Our Mothers and Fathers

lol!!! I loved this... it was so cute! But what's going on with Japheth?

Author's Response: Peek at the entry on UncannyXmen.net for a character called Maggot. That's him. Otherwise, glad you liked it, Tiger. Thanks for the review!

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