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Reviewer: Ang Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-22-07 - 03:48 am Title: chapter 2

DAMN, need I say more.

Reviewer: Anjeline Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-16-07 - 10:14 pm Title: chapter 2

its good so far but the only thing is to work on your grammar ;) im a grammar freak

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for the review.

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-16-07 - 06:28 pm Title: chapter 2

The all caps made it a weensy bit distracting, and there are different ways we can mark something as a flashback:

Italic text using your "" tags around the paragraphs where they begin and end.

Asterisk marks (*) with a note under Author's Note showing "* means flashback."

{Flashback} in brackets before and after where the scene starts and ends.

All right. Nitpicking over. Another very good chapter with good use of language and no wasted words, lots of plot in this one short chapter. Give us some more, please!

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-16-07 - 02:13 am Title: chapter 2

I'm sorry I didn't really read this and I'll tell you why. It's in all CAPS. That and the huge paragraph. My advise is to resubmit this chapter. If you break up the paragraph and put it in lower case I'd read this because the first chapter piqued my curiosity enough to do so. Please consider as it makes it easier on readers and therefore might give you more readers and more reviews. Just some thoughts. No offense is meant at all.

Author's Response: Hey Darlin, First of all thank you for both of your reviews. Don't worry no offence was taken. I will definately go back and rewrite many of my mistakes. In regards to the spelling your absolutely right. I have a wireless card installed and every time I would finish writing the story it would tell me I was working of line and I would have to retype everything since it would be gone when I signed back on. I hope to get a chance later this week and I can"t wait for the new reviews.

Reviewer: VenomQueen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-15-07 - 04:57 pm Title: chapter 2

I like it. I like Victor as her love interest, it makes wolverine squirm a little and its a softer side of Victor. Good start.

Author's Response: Thank you ver much for the review. If you get a chance read " Eyes of seduction" and tell me what you think.

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-15-07 - 03:58 pm Title: chapter 2

Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter see/read what happens to storm and LOGAN next so UPDATE SOON.

Author's Response: Thanks! Hope you also like the following chapters.

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