This is actually an interesting story. You hardly ever see 2n person stories being written probably because its hard to pull off the effect of placing the person perfectly in each situation. None the less I like the theme that this story has about single-parent families. Its hits more at home for me because I grew up in a single parent home and I can identify with some of the issues that both families have gone through. And I think you portray that beautifully in this story and I hope to see more.

Okay. I love this. The scene at the front door was priceless and so real. Once again, I love the second person narrative and Ororo's relationship with her daughter. Other details made this warm and familiar, like eating the rest of the blue JellO. I know you're probably busy with school, but I can't wait til you update this again.