Date: 12-24-05 - 11:50 pm Title: Intro...
The story sounds pretty good so far i am looking forward to the rest. Two girls sounds like trouble.
Date: 02-12-04 - 09:01 pm Title: Intro...
I couldn't remember if I reviewed this or not--sigh...senility. Anyway, cute, cute, cute! Logan and Ororo married with kids is hilariously sweet.
Date: 02-09-04 - 03:39 am Title: Intro...
Oh, I shouldn't love a story this much, but I do! For the love of all humanity--update! =D
Date: 02-05-04 - 03:45 am Title: Intro...
Reminds me of my family...sigh, but without the supa cool powers. Still, awesome fic. Logan and Ororo with kids is hard to picture but cute to read.
Date: 02-04-04 - 01:44 am Title: Intro...
Sigh, I can honestly say I have read and love every story you've produced here and at other sites. You are a master at writing. Update soon, okay?!! ^_^
Date: 01-30-04 - 04:50 pm Title: Intro...
LOL! and cool story! Can't wait to see more and maybe the end of this story sometime...not very far of into the future.
Date: 01-28-04 - 11:21 pm Title: Intro...
I know Star will agree with me in this. First... WOW!!!!!
Now to brass tacks: Your greatest gift is sucking the reader right inside the story, that's because your characters are wholly human and believable and because your dialogue flows unimpeded. Your style is essential and your use of stereotypes is both ironic and illuminating.
Of course the Queen of cliffhangers! Even if nothing had happened I'd still be panting for more!
Love you!
Dada
Author's Response: Wow...coming from you that means the world, thank you. Makes me so happy you enjoyed it so much:) And if I'm the Queen of Cliffhangers what does that make you, dada...lol. Love you too my sweet dada and Uncle too:)
Date: 01-28-04 - 03:46 am Title: Intro...
Very funny, 2 sisters that don't get along too well. Both trouble makers. Maybe they can come to a truce and make trouble together, LOL.
Date: 01-27-04 - 07:18 pm Title: Intro...
Very cool start! Hope ta read more of it!
Date: 01-27-04 - 05:53 pm Title: Intro...
Pari, this is a wonderful start to the fic. Very nice and I hope to see more before too long :)
Date: 01-27-04 - 05:27 pm Title: Intro...
lol I like it, very cute :D so are you gonna finish this one? lol
Date: 01-27-04 - 11:14 am Title: Intro...
YAY! Great start, can't wait for more! You're a star!!
Date: 01-27-04 - 11:02 am Title: Intro...
Love it! Glad you didn't forget about it, girl. More, more, more
Date: 01-27-04 - 09:49 am Title: Intro...
LOL. That was cute. Love that final comeback. XD
Date: 01-27-04 - 07:09 am Title: Intro...
Ow!! That was like soooooooo funny!!! i hope you continue this i want 2 see just how much trouble does 2 girls can cause!! lol!!