Wow, this was intense, enjoyable. I was captured from the first few chapter. at first I thought, 'where is all this history / goddess myths going?' Why are the Xmen not seeing the love that Logan is feeling for Ororo? I couldn't belive it when you wrote references to Ororo's death. Does Hank not get he has competition for Ororo's affections?

I was not impressed by Hanks initial proposal to use 'Ro's body. He ends up being a little inconsistent in the story so far. Hank's characther opened the door and Cyclops ran through it, ok Cyke's obviously lost it, but what's Hank's excuse for putting up such and idea in the first place.

The last chapter had an interesting twist and obviously opened doors to possibilities. Keep writing Pari you story and pace are working really well.

Yes, Yes, YES!!!! My heart jumped for joy when I found out that 'Ro is alive.