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Reviewer: Lyger Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-23-05 - 08:06 pm Title: The tool....

Got to love a very beautiful woman who excites you even more when she gets her mind set on something,even when she gets angry Ororo you got to love her !!

Reviewer: Lyger Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-23-05 - 08:06 pm Title: The tool....

Got to love a very beautiful woman who excites you even more when she gets her mind set on something,even when she gets angry Ororo you got to love her !!

Reviewer: NemesisBecoming Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-02-04 - 12:21 pm Title: The tool....

Your writing style here is so very well done. You bring us right into the story without us having to go through the whole "well how powerful is she?" exposition. Your research and how you integrate it into this story is absolutely amazing. Just through the choreography of the dialogue, we are made aware of the relationship dynamics of the group and the possible conflicts that may arise. Your writing style has definitely improved. I am shaking my laptop hoping another chapter will just pop out or something. It's not working. UPDATE!

Reviewer: JamesGirl0512 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-30-04 - 02:34 am Title: The tool....

I love this story already. Scott was waaaaaaay out of line. Would someone hit that guy for me....Logan I'm talking to you. LOL. Anyway great story Pari...as usual, can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: ToughSpirit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-29-04 - 08:51 pm Title: The tool....

Getting very interesting. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: thewindrider278 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-29-04 - 02:30 pm Title: The tool....

well well my dear i believe you have outdone yourself..... this fic is absolutely magnificent and a treat to read..... mythology is one of my favorite subjects to read on, if not my favorite..... i love the way you have started the fic.... im beginning to dislike scott already.... lol please give me more!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Playwiththewinds Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-29-04 - 02:27 pm Title: The tool....

i always love your fics, they get btter and better, i cat wait to see how this one turns out. if it's anythinglike the opening chaters it'll be wkd

Reviewer: Ororo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-29-04 - 11:25 am Title: The tool....

Great fic,Pari!! Love the sort-of-tale chap 1 and now we're getting into real trouble! Storm vs Phoenix - the battle of the century! And thanks for the dedication :) You're lovely.

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