This was moving. I am a sucker for the color red in lit, particularly in relation to the Phoenix and during sunsets. It gives me that same little happy tickle of "I understand what the author is trying to say" the same way it does with stories like "The Scarlet Letter." I get immediate gratification with color imagery and symbolism in fic, suffice it to say.

I love Scott saying "I never had a Plan B." That sums up so much of him, in comics and the movie. Logan realizing that Scott and Jean had such a comprehensive relationship where he just wanted "the passion and the ache" was deep, too, and fitting.

Yup. Real life is a drag, but make time for us as you can. Keep this coming.

CeeCee

Author's Response: Heys! Thanks for the positive and detailed review! Yeah, at the time it just felt a natural progression to just go all color-ey when thinking about a chick named "Red". It kinds went nuts after that. And thanks on the Scott thing. I felt I needed to quantify the whole triangle thing. I mean, face it, he only knew her the culmination of a week. The third is coming though I wanted to post up Remem before as I had promised. RL is a sonovabitch.

Great chapter ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I can't wait to read the next chapter so UPDATE SOON.


Author's Response: :)