You have a very gifted way of writing. It's almost like poetry with every sentance you write. I envy you of this, but as beautiful the language is, I easily get lost in your words and can't see the story. But I guess this is more like a vingette, poem and reflection. And for that the language is perfect, even if I get lost in the beautiful words :)

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I do see what you mean about the over flowery language. And, yeah, I'm sure everyone's asking what is the plot? True. True. I guess in my initial writing of this, I wanted to concentrate on just what the aftermath of such a major event like that would be. Oh, trust me. It's leading up to something. Something hinted upon in the first chapter, but, of course, vaguely so. I need to write plainer though. I agree. Working my way there.

Please, please tell me there will be more to this. It's fantastically written, and I think I'm a little addicted. :D I really hope you continue. :D

Author's Response: Yeah. I'm a jerk. I'm back and motivated to be through with this up-in-the-air mess once and for all. :)

You have such a grasp of the English language that you make a fellow author bow their head with something akin to shame when they (I) think of (my) paltry efforts that pale in comparison to yours. Your work is just phenomenal and always a joy to read. You and Digital Tempest are worlds apart from most other RoLo writers.

Author's Response: PSHAW! First off, during my lurking phase, you were on the short list of my favorite authors. I thank you deeply for your kind words and you regard. Now, let's you and I get together and force DigT to update!

Wonderful start. We get a fanastic sense of the devastation caused by a teammates death--the true impact of this kind of event on real people. Top notch as always ;), xx

Author's Response: Thank you, M'iko! I'm glad you liked it so far. There's a lot of beautiful lurve going on in this house. When can I throw some back at you, heah? HEAH? ;)

Wow, NemB....Simply, Wow... Your grasp of the remaining X-men members' pain at having to leave the site of Jean's demise....simply powerful. I truly believe that this should have been the way Fox and Singer presented the scene to us at the conclusion of X2. Your writing style is so polished, so sophisticated, and such a joy to read. I felt totally immersed in this memory; felt sorrow for Scott and Logan; understood Ro's dilemma--all because of your masterful skill at story-telling. Bravo.

Author's Response: Wow! Thanks, Echo! Reading your dealing with tough issues in "Sunsets" it warms me to pieces to see your positive regard. I am speechless to your glowing review. Wow! Thanks! I hug you times four!