Penname: toyathegr8 [Contact] Real name: toyathegr8
Member Since: 02-21-06
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Storm and RoLo fan.
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Devil Inside by Marikosan-7 Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 15]
Summary: Film Noir,AU. Set in 1930's New York.Jimmy Logan P.I. is given the seemingly simple task of following the wife of a jealous husband.But political corruption, blackmail and organized crime muddy the waters.
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55400 Read Count: 13894
[Report This] Published: 07-05-03 Updated: 09-28-03
Reviewer: toyathegr8 Signed Liked
Date: 02-26-06 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter.2.

lol great job!! i can easily picture this in blk and white, with a smoky gloss!

Reviewer: toyathegr8 Signed Liked
Date: 02-26-06 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter.3.

Rawr!! shame on Remy lol blackmailin' her..though I wanna know what go0ds he has on her!

Tabula Rasa by Pari Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 77]
Summary: An accident leaves everyone to start over...
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16892 Read Count: 23496
[Report This] Published: 10-16-03 Updated: 04-30-10
Reviewer: toyathegr8 Signed Liked
Date: 02-26-06 Title: Chapter 6: Wanna be starting something...

I can't wait for you to continue/conclude this..I'm ho0ked! Don't leave hanging lol :::puppy eyes:::
Awsum story!
:-B

Summary: From separate lives, two grieving souls find the strength to comfort one another during the most difficult of times.
Categories: Serials
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Violence, Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 136592 Read Count: 67262
[Report This] Published: 05-07-04 Updated: 08-07-08
Reviewer: toyathegr8 Signed Liked
Date: 02-22-06 Title: Chapter 14: Reunion, pt. 1

lol...i guess they can chew ice in the mean time, great chapter. Lookin forward for more soon

Author's Response: Hmmmmm...toyathegr8, that gives me an idea...;)

Reviewer: toyathegr8 Signed Liked
Date: 03-04-06 Title: Chapter 16: Reunion, pt. 3

Whoa, KOOL chapter lol...for *some* reason im REALLY liking the ice idea! anywaysssss...you juss gotta update so0n, you won't deny me would you??
im insatiable!
:-B

Reviewer: toyathegr8 Signed Liked
Date: 03-09-06 Title: Chapter 17: Reunion, pt. 4

*hehe* thats was mmazing lol..icy-hot sensations thats a new one. ill be looking forward for an update [soon]..*goes and blushes in a corner*
:-B

Summary: Apathy. Betrayal. Destruction. Revenge is an act of passion; vengeance of justice. Injuries are revenged; crimes are avenged. New truths come to light. Old hurts are mended. And just who’s deceiving who?
Categories: Serials
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action
Warnings: Violence, Adult language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 37035 Read Count: 20309
[Report This] Published: 07-20-05 Updated: 04-22-06
Reviewer: toyathegr8 Signed Liked
Date: 04-08-06 Title: Chapter 6: Entr’acte: Three Can Keep a Secret

you've..you've..you've updated!! yay, omg the suspense is just great i like the angle your going with here; very interesting and ko0l
:-B

Summary: Based on Jane Austins wonderful novel. Lo/Ro style.
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13164 Read Count: 14302
[Report This] Published: 12-12-05 Updated: 04-01-07
Reviewer: toyathegr8 Signed Liked
Date: 03-17-06 Title: Chapter 3: Making new acquaintances

lol having read pride and prejudice and it being one of my favorite books i was soo anxious when you started it!! now you've updated yay!! continue, im liking it :]

Kingdom Come by windrider1 Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 194]
Summary: A revision of what was started--a story of love, betrayal, redemption and renewel.
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action, Horror, Angst
Warnings: Violence, Adult language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92031 Read Count: 115868
[Report This] Published: 12-22-05 Updated: 06-21-06
Reviewer: toyathegr8 Signed Liked
Date: 02-22-06 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

LOL Peter is such a sport and Ali is downright funny. Im interest about what 'Ro's strange powers are goin to do to her...she went all MUST KILL on the sentinels so im guessin' more psychological than physical...Logan got some splainin' ta do too..o0o this story oozes good writin'.

Reviewer: toyathegr8 Signed Liked
Date: 03-17-06 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

What.A.Revelation.Creed is..is.Logan's son!?!?! Dam just when (update soon)I think its safe ya pull one on me [not that im (update soon) complainin' ..i like being on my toes]. Mm, 'Ro's scaring (update soon) me in that oh so interesting, got me curious way!
Hey Ali is pretty cool i (update soon) wish i could replace my friends with her..seriously..no seriously lol juss kiddin' but yeah i just want to acknowledge her; she is as attached to me as Logan and Ororo (update soon). Speaking of Logan and Ororo those two are like fire and gasoline; (update soon) whenever they are together things ignite ;]...Oh yeah, whats Logan gunna do?? His demeanor got me suspicious...pfft lol (update soon). wonderful job as usual windrider (update soon), you know how much i love ya writing!
ill be sure to tune in next time! "again, and again and again", your a "B.A.M.F"

Author's Response: Thanks!! You're a B.A.M.F too!! (I'll update soon) That was subtle. :P ;)

Reviewer: toyathegr8 Signed Liked
Date: 04-16-06 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Fifteen

holy shoit! where to start??
1. sometimes wolvie's honor code and need to protect only hurts people i.e, him and ro :(
2. whats wif storm? my theory is that her powers are increasing or judging my language her magical hertiage is burstin' forth! muhahhaha
3. nick fury-grr dastardly pig
xavier-double grr push-over
4. c'mon we all know logan ain't gunna go play hop-scotch when he wakes--get 'em !!
5. lol ororo falling out the bed was funny
6. great job as usual windrider and do update soon :)

Author's Response: 1. So true 2. Nope. :P (But not far off) 3. Caught in the middle pig. 4. Grr, baby 5. :) 6. Thanks, and I'll try!

Summary: (COMPLETE: With 'Alternate' ending) “How long before they destroy each other.” Once happy, their relationship has soured to where he can't even stand the of her. And as for her....well, read on for that. (AU Movieverse)
Categories: NC-17
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59845 Read Count: 134949
[Report This] Published: 01-09-06 Updated: 10-09-06
Reviewer: toyathegr8 Signed Liked
Date: 02-22-06 Title: Chapter 9: Dark Conversation

0i, im lovin' this story, heartbreaker though. I URGE you to add more SOON..

Author's Response: Will update today!!

Summary: Ehn. Read it. LOL.
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 46432 Read Count: 62854
[Report This] Published: 01-14-06 Updated: 06-03-06
Reviewer: toyathegr8 Signed Liked
Date: 02-26-06 Title: Chapter 8: Divergence

great chapter!! I'm luving this chapter..and it both makes me happy and sad. Happy cuz things are mounting even more [yay tension!!]T'Challa/Logan/Ororo/Emma-dissin'. Sad cuz T'Challa and 'Ro seem to go together quite nicely..but wait! destiny will lead 'ro and logan back to each other, right?!?! hope to see more soon..
:-B

Author's Response: An update is definitely forthcoming and should be up soon. If I haven't said it already, thank you, thank you for taking the time to review. I love that you are so involved with where this story is going. ::Muah!!::

Reviewer: toyathegr8 Signed Liked
Date: 03-04-06 Title: Chapter 9: Tears and Rain

After i finally got to breathing again i looked up "freaking genius!" and it said.."see windrider!".
This chapter..this chapter..im speechless..my vocabulary lacks the word to describe this beautiful, emotional, fantastic and unexpected piece of work! When you said "Waaaaaaay too much to discuss" you meant it! I...I mean first Logan tells her he loves her then its revealed that she is preganant, then she tells T'Challa then he dies[ protecting her]!! *struggles to catch breath* Now theres questions left unanswered: hows tha baby? Whats gonna be 'Ro's and Logan's relationship dynamic? Will she go back to Africa as queen or no? Was T'Shan gonna do now that the king is gone[ 'Ro outa kick his faux-royal arse!] oh yeah! whats with her leg??
W- is for WOW!!!
0-is for OMG!!!
W-is for WINDRIDER you must update soon! this wonderfully written and insanely addicting
:-B

Author's Response: LMAO! You looked up 'freaking genius"? Nice!! Let's see if I can answer--or at least hint some answers--to your questions. ;) The baby--undecided (not pulling your leg i really am undecided) Ro and Logan's relationship dynamic--complicated. More revealed soon on that. Yes--she will go back to Africa. T'Shan is rebelling, his forces seek to declare war, and with no king Wakanda is extremely vulnerable...Her legs? She can't move them. At all. Hope that whet your appetite for the next installment. ;)

Reviewer: toyathegr8 Signed Liked
Date: 03-17-06 Title: Chapter 10: Aftermath

Garsh windy..You make me feel fer these characters and *sniffle* and..i get so involved..it is my personal believe that you're an excellent writer aside from rolo and stuff you write excellent fiction..
-sigh- well logans giving her her space, hopefully that would not mean they drift too far part and Ro is slowly recovering [yay!]
continue to update this! you must! you will?:D
:-B