Of course I reviewed this offline on LJ, but I had to tag this, too! It's so good to see you back, Gainee, and what a fantastic update to come back with!

I love Kitty and Wolverine together when they verbally spar, or even when she's just in his corner fighting on his behalf, so this has me grinning ear to ear.

I hope Logan makes it in time to save their baby, and that Ororo survives to enjoy having her family together again...of course, I know you have delightfully evil plot twists afoot! You're going to sit there and make me sweat over what's gonna happen next, aintcha??? I just enjoy how you developed so many different relationships in this piece, and made us care about each one.

Okay. You've won my everlasting devotion - again - with these two lines:

“Right, if I start seeing leprechauns and fairies, I’m so outta here.”

“Nah, we put those in the shed before we left, with the flying ponies and trolls.”

That was fabulous. That and the line about "Boys are stinky, throw rocks at them" My friend at work used to have a sticker on her desk that said that from Hot Topic. Logan reminding Ororo that Bishop sees her as his mother was beautiful. Rock on, Gainee.

Dang. Ooey-gooey goodness aplenty. I love all the respective goodbye lovin' in this for each couple. I just enjoy seeing those relationships, and how protective each one of them is about their mate. Betsy has some neat layers in this story, definitely different from your interpretation of her in Walk the Line or Fade. Like John was thinking, she really did have a silly, fanciful side that worked well, in spite of how dark her role was as Magneto's disciple. Having to comb through diseased minds? Creepy.

I can't wait for the next two chapters. Or for anything else that you give us, Gainee.

Wow! Talk about a turnaround from the party scene with the women dealing each other the dozens!

A scene like Warren and Ororo's tussle would be great, if you were so inclined, in a comics verse fic where they are "heroes and villains" as opposed to regular people, if you had it in mind to write another piece any time soon... hint, hint, hint.

Ororo's interesting, and fun to read here, because she is snarky and using Warren's games against him. Now, what's up with Scott???

Author's Response: Well you'll just have to find out "What's with Scott" in the next chapter or so =) and theres definitley more RoLo coming up so be readyyy! and thanks for your review again! Gosh I love you!

This was fabulous. I love Logan getting that faint scent of Ororo and changing his plans instead of going on the attack. Your phrasing and pace are very good. Remy winking at Rogue was cute.

Author's Response: I'm glad the scene hopping wasn't too confusing. I had the scene with Logan and Ororo in my head before I wrote the intro lol At first I was going to do the entire chapter with no dialogue, but I thought that would be mean. I'll be mean later ;)

Cool, you brought in Piotr! And Logan and Ororo finally meet face to face! I'm a happy camper now. Great descriptions and pace. Remy's a doll. The exchanges between him and Logan are always great.

Author's Response: lol I thought he'd be the perfect first friendly face for 'Ro to see. I was going to have ya'll wait for them to meet for another chapter, but that would just be cruel wouldn't it?

Once again, you have reminded me why I have such mixed feelings about Jean. She's likable and smart and sassy on the one hand, and always vulnerable, but on the other, she's selfish and flighty. It was great seeing the exchange between her and Scott, and as usual, seeing Scott's devotion to her, even when they argued the point about Logan and Ororo's friendship.

I love the pace of this story. I love the various relationships that make this more fun than watching a Days of Our Lives episode mixed with a little bit of Jerry Springer. Feels like by the end of the story, we'll have had a crazy wedding and a chair across someone's nose. More, please.

You know me, I love my angst. Kitty and Warren makes me warm and fuzzy. Never in the comics, but it's perfect for movie verse, since I love movie Warren. It's nice to see Kitty, usually the pursuer, or usually the one everyone neglects, having two guys who kinda like her for a change.

The scene in the kitchen was great. That would have given me a migraine, too. Even though I love my RoLo lovin' as much as the next person, I'm enjoying watching them argue. Keep it coming. This was well worded, well paced, and very engaging, Gainee.