Couldn't help but to smile as I read your story. Very well written and entertaining. The conversation and easy rapport between the two of them was great. Hope to read more from you soon.

Author's Response: Aaaah, you don\'t know how much I agonized over their conversation, wondering how much was too much or too little, or if it felt stilted and forced... So hearing this is really great. Thank you for the review! :)

I am sooo loving your sense of humor. Chapter two was so visually worded I felt I could be standing in the midst of all the happenings. Ororo is so Ororo to me in this and Logan is just too appealing with all his gruff comedic tenderness. Please keep it up. Angel A

Author's Response: I'm glad you don't find them acting out of character! What I love about X-Men Evolution is that it allows even Logan to be fun without being *too* fun. The other thing I love about this universe is that it's not a stretch to think that RoLo can be a realistic direction for it to end up in. They really do act like father/mother figures in this cartoon, moreso than any other media franchise, I think. :) Thanks for your feedback! It means a lot! b29;

Ya know I love/hate Jean because of Logan's incessant pining after her instead of focusing on what was right before his face with Ororo. Ehh, wouldn't be sorry to see her die, but I do like her, if that makes any sense. :P I have written very little with the Blob, nothing posted here, so sorry I would be no help there. And don't knock your writing, there will always be someone else to do that for ya.

Author's Response: Got it.

;-) Ya' know I like yer stories, still have me getting used to the nickname of Oro being used, but I love your imagination with yer work. :)

Author's Response: Thank you. I think Oro comes more naturally to me than Ro. I\'m not quite sure why unless it\'s other authors rubbing off on me which is possible. I have another one in the works but I\'m stuck on the second half. I\'ll get it over as soon as I can. <3

Was just posting when I saw your story. It is way cute. I love that there is now a story that speaks of Greek mythology, which I also love. I think you hit the nail right on the head with Logans comparison to Hades and Ororo to his stolen wife Persephone. I enjoyed reading this, thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: Thank you. I read the Percy Jackson series a few months ago and found the first book while I was cleaning then this came to me.

Really good re-write of the movie. You weren't kidding when you said you like yourself some Hawk. :) You are unique in that you have not pidgeoned holed yourself into the usual use of the same characters. Well done.

Author's Response: Thanks

Hey Monroe
I was really excited to see another writer on the site, as I'm sure all would say welcome.
I have read your first chapter 3 times now and find your concept to be great. I would recommend getting a beta reader before final post however. Not being critical just a little constructive advice, I hope. A lot of the mispelled words are a hindrance to an enjoyable read to your fantastic fic. It also seems some thought points are missing. I'm no expert, so please don't think I'm trying to be harsh, god knows I make my fair share of bloopers. Just look in the menu section of this site and I'm sure betas are willing to help you. Please continue writing, as you have a talent for it, and I will be reading. Once again this is not a negative, I like your imaginative story, it's different from most. : )

Author's Response: Thank you for your suggestions, i have been beta hunting but no one has gotten back to me. I did also say i needed a beta on my profile, because i know i really do need one. :) thanks again for the review.