Everything fit so perfectly. I was totally surprised by the revelations in this story. I know I mentioned that before but I left out that the revelation of how their daughter died was a complete shock, very sad. I loved that, the originality of it, very well thought out, and the whole split personality thing another original and well written idea. I was glad to read over these and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

For once I really enjoyed Scott, glad to see him mellowing or I guess accepting the way things are. It was however the oddest thing to have T'Challa calling Ororo sister but a relief when I was thinking he'd try to move in when she was at a low point. I also really liked Ben showing up and his attitude. Well done.

I read the last part with my mouth hanging wide open. It's the Epi and it's NOT the end? That's bittersweet. I do like Scott finally getting with Jean and that Scott and Ororo are in a good place. And I see there's a continuation so I'll have to read that later. Overall a really good job and I'm glad you came back to this story.

Ooo Hoo! Dumping the beer - brave woman! This is fun. I rather like Scott and Ororo's relationship.

I remember reading this on fanfiction a few years ago and enjoying it. I have to say this was my favorite line - "The accumulation of cigar smoke, Canadian Beer, beef jerky, leather, metal, Old Spice and testosterone makes my head swim in deep waters and I only get wet in one place." Hot! I also liked the comment about the Baby On Board T-shirt. Don't know why but I think they're 'positively thoughtfully tacky' too. Interesting. It was fun to read this again!

Oh you wicked, wicked Windrider you! I remember reading the first chapter years ago on ff.net and hating the end but loving the well written story and to find so belatedly that you actually gave us a second chapter! I’m flabbergasted and delighted – totally. The ending had me laughing – after all that tension, after all that heat and – wow! Now that was an ending! Well done! Just splendidly done!

Suppose I need to get caught up on all your other stories too, I can imagine all the goodies waiting for me. *blows kiss*

Hmm! Intriguing! It's so nice to see Logan's 'Origin's incorporated into a story. Very nice. And the past between Remy and Ororo was beyond surprising. I can't wait to see what may lie ahead for each of these characters for better or worse. Now in all good conscious I have to mention that there were a few typos such as ‘relieving’ instead of ‘reliving’ and I thought you'd want to know that whenever you end a line with quotation marks and someone's speaking and you have something like: 'Okay," He said - he shouldn't be capitalized. For example: "You ready?" she asked. It's still part of the sentence I suppose. Finally you slipped into present tense with Remy - Remy paces instead of Remy paced. Hope this helps you and please don't take it the wrong way because I'm really enjoying your story especially the fast updates and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.