Summary: Unsettled by her love for her best friend Storm decided to leave the mansion, shocked when she received an unexpected traveling companion.
Ro/Lo
Ro/Re
Categories: NC-17
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 27006 Read Count: 28536
Member Since: 05-15-03
Membership status: Member
Bio:
I got in a tizzy a few years ago, decided to give up fan fiction, so deleted all my stories. But later when I went to delete my ff.net account I just couldn't. I felt I had one story left in me. But, um, yeah, no stories remain here. Sorry.
I'm not putting my stories back here even though two of the stories that were here aren't on fanfiction.net. I've been so lazy (one reason I'm not reposting anything here) but one day I plan to post the two stories I had here over there. And if anyone cares you can read my stories at fanficdtion.net under the same name, Darlin. I also have stories with Ororo paired with Remy/Kurt/Iceman/Quicksilver/Thor/Sabretooth and maybe down the road even with Legolas. And if you like LotR I've a link there to another account I have, dreamingnwatercolors, with a few LotR stories as well as Firefly and Hildago.
I have to say I kind of miss this site, the camaraderie. I wonder what's up with some of my favorite author's and hope they're well.
Membership status: Member
Bio:
I'm not putting my stories back here even though two of the stories that were here aren't on fanfiction.net. I've been so lazy (one reason I'm not reposting anything here) but one day I plan to post the two stories I had here over there. And if anyone cares you can read my stories at fanficdtion.net under the same name, Darlin. I also have stories with Ororo paired with Remy/Kurt/Iceman/Quicksilver/Thor/Sabretooth and maybe down the road even with Legolas. And if you like LotR I've a link there to another account I have, dreamingnwatercolors, with a few LotR stories as well as Firefly and Hildago.
I have to say I kind of miss this site, the camaraderie. I wonder what's up with some of my favorite author's and hope they're well.
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[Report This] Published: 06-22-05 Updated: 08-01-07
Reviewer: Darlin Signed 
Date: 06-30-05 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Interesting Conversations
Date: 06-30-05 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Interesting Conversations
I haven't had the time to check for updates and I should have made time since you've got to be the fastest poster I've ever seen. I've nothing but admiration for you in that department - superb! So I've sent these last chapters to myself at work and will read them there and come back to review later as time permits. Thanks again for updating so wonderfully fast! :D
Reviewer: Darlin Signed
Date: 07-03-05 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Confessions
Date: 07-03-05 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Confessions
This was very sweet. I like how they're both trying to help the other.
Reviewer: Darlin Signed
Date: 07-03-05 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Day Dreaming
Date: 07-03-05 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Day Dreaming
That last sentence sounded so good. I like how you handled the Origin and him remembering. Nice.
Reviewer: Darlin Signed
Date: 07-05-05 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Down Time
Date: 07-05-05 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Down Time
I'm really enjoying this story. I like the pace. It's just right. I also like Remy realizing how he feels and I'm actually torn between which man I want her with though that love scene had me preferring Logan. I really felt Storm's need to feel the way you wrote that. I thought that was quite nice. Despite the typos you've done a good job with this chapter.
Reviewer: Darlin Signed
Date: 07-14-05 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Best Of You
Date: 07-14-05 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Best Of You
The inclusion of Remy was like cold water splashed on my face and I love Remy and Ro together but the way you started this chapter was so beautiful - really lovely. One of the best RoLo moments I've ever read. I'm really liking your slow development of the two. Nicely done.
Reviewer: Darlin Signed
Date: 07-17-05 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Return to New Orleans
Date: 07-17-05 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Return to New Orleans
I like this story a lot but you have a few typos that actually take away from the story at the end. I don't mean to be picky, it's just that I do enjoy this story so much and that last line left me wondering what you were trying to have her say. “Yes, it rain,” She whispered . . . maybe "Yes, let it rain?" Still, your RoLo is lovely and I love the pacing, that they weren't going at it like rabbits full of lust but waiting to see how things went and taking the time to resolve things. Very nice. Oddly I found myself missing Remy here but I enjoyed the absence of song lyrics as well meaning no offense just that I don't care for song fics. Let me add that the lyrics previously and in other chapters take nothing away from the story, probably add to it to many, and are easily ignored for those such as myself who don't care for them. I sound like a nut I'm sure, up too early I suppose. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter - love the fact that you update so quickly, quite admire that.
Reviewer: Darlin Signed
Date: 07-20-05 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Time in Da BIg Easy
Date: 07-20-05 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Time in Da BIg Easy
Well, that's definitely a way to leave us clamoring for more! My first reaction was that Remy had found them but the'd have to be telepathic for that yet they do seem to have that type of bond which is intriguing in itself. Very nice chapter, Ladie.
Reviewer: Darlin Signed
Date: 07-24-05 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 The Storm's Fury
Date: 07-24-05 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 The Storm's Fury
Whoa! Get out of here! Now that was totally unexpected! What a wild ride you're taking us on! Enjoying this immensely!
Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01-01-70 Updated: 01-01-70
Reviewer: Darlin Signed
Date: 07-03-05 Title: None
Date: 07-03-05 Title: None
Very intriguing premise, looking forward to see where this is going.
Summary: Someone is trying to cause harm to the property and people at the Xavier's Institute for Gifted Youngsters. (AU)
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action, Angst
Warnings: Violence, Adult language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63087 Read Count: 61768
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action, Angst
Warnings: Violence, Adult language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63087 Read Count: 61768
[Report This] Published: 06-29-05 Updated: 07-25-05
Reviewer: Darlin Signed
Date: 06-30-05 Title: Chapter 1: Security Alert
Date: 06-30-05 Title: Chapter 1: Security Alert
I'm glad to see you over here, Bats and will read the other chapters I haven't had time to when I get to work and check out the Storm group. I did want to say that I'm intrigued by this story as I mentioned before. There are a few typos or where you've left out a word here or there but I've been able to keep up so far. I do think the use of contractions could be used a little more to make everyone sound more natural but other than that, again, I'm quite intrigued and I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the chapters when I get to work.
Reviewer: Darlin Signed
Date: 07-03-05 Title: Chapter 11: Sneak Attack
Date: 07-03-05 Title: Chapter 11: Sneak Attack
Damn. That's a cliffy if ever I saw one!
Reviewer: Darlin Signed
Date: 07-03-05 Title: Chapter 12: Primal Instincts
Date: 07-03-05 Title: Chapter 12: Primal Instincts
Good grief, man you write with the speed of someone possessed! I can't believe you've gotten so many chapters out in what, a week or less? Well, the story's full of drama though I'm hoping for a happy ending. I think I'd used contractions more to make everyone sound a little more natural and I was curious about the use of ye when Vic was speaking - was that supposed to mean you?
Reviewer: Darlin Signed
Date: 07-26-05 Title: Chapter 28: James
Date: 07-26-05 Title: Chapter 28: James
Truth be told I have not read all the chapters because you updated so incredibly fast I simply couldn't keep up. It's like there's something in the air and everyone's got update fever. But I did read most of your story and thought it came to a fitting end. I can only commend you on your excellent and incredible ability to juggle two or three stories at the same time AND update so fast. Purely remarkable!
Author's Response: this was my first x-men fic and second one in total...I had a blast writing it. currently working on 'Dreams' for X-men and 'Choices' for JLA. Planning on starting another AU fic for x-men soon.
Summary: The X-Men BBQ. Ro/Lo fluff.
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2357 Read Count: 4953
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2357 Read Count: 4953
[Report This] Published: 07-04-05 Updated: 07-04-05
Reviewer: Darlin Signed
Date: 07-05-05 Title: Chapter 1: BBQ
Date: 07-05-05 Title: Chapter 1: BBQ
That was so good! Funny, especially Remy, and sweet. I really enjoyed this! Just perfect for the 4th! Excellent job.
Summary: The first part of the story takes place before Forge asks 'Ro to marry him....with two friends jogging
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Violence, Adult language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22854 Read Count: 31697
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Violence, Adult language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22854 Read Count: 31697
[Report This] Published: 07-18-05 Updated: 10-03-05
Reviewer: Darlin Signed
Date: 07-20-05 Title: Chapter 1: A morning jog
Date: 07-20-05 Title: Chapter 1: A morning jog
I like this approach you have as if we're there with them in the present. I like the era you're writing in a lot and how you seem to know the comics well which is always a wonderful bonus. I will say there're a few mistakes in composition however since this seems to be your first story and written some time ago it's nothing to complain about. I quite enjoyed this chapter and am looking forward to the next few, see you just updated too!
