

Date: 08-15-14 - 06:46 am Title: Chapter 7
I Loved it! Please updated!

Date: 08-21-12 - 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 7
Ok, I know I shouldn't but I laughed at Jean cause she didn't know she was just a substitute for who Logan really wanted. It's mean. I know but I really don't like her I this story.
Who I really am enjoying is Remy. Love that Cajun and how he takes up for Ororo.
Now you got me wondering who Ororo is promised to and how does Remy know?
Please update soon. :)

Date: 08-21-12 - 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
God I love to hate Jean!! This story is soooo good. Logan is being a total ass though, I hope or gets a chance to kick his ass in the danger room in front of everyone! I need to know who she's promised to and why Remy is being rude and how he knows so much. Long live rolo!
Jade
Date: 08-18-12 - 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 7
This fic is really off the chain! I am so loving it. Please don't make us wait too long for your next chapter. Wonderful story telling. A A

Date: 08-17-12 - 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 7
Doing my "one of my favorite stories got updated" dance!. Where to start? I loved the fact that Logan is fantasizing about Ororo when he is with Jean and coming up dissatisfied that he has a pale imitation! I love 'Ro and Remy's friendship and that it's making Logan hot under the collar. The description of Logan and Ororo's first encounter was beautiful! You truly capture the natural and instant pull they had for one another. I can't wait to find out who Ororo is promised to and how Remy already knows who it is.

Date: 08-16-12 - 08:06 am Title: Chapter 7
Hiya CoCo, this is Hema from FF.Net. I forgot in my other review that I liked how you had Ro and Lo starting to think of each other as husband and wife! At first you only really notice when Ro uses 'husband' in dialogue. It seems they're both taking a step in the right direction.
I having a feeling that Jean is going to be embarrassed, again, very soon. The tension between Ro and Lo is just going to continue to rise until they both fall onto each other in a mansion rocking sex-storm !! ^_^
Update soon!!!!
P.s. I kind of noticed some things got kind of slushed in repost ( paragraphs showing up twice, missing words, etc). Just though you'd like to know.
Author's Response: Hello again :D
i apologize english isnt my first language or my second haha
every time i go to post some error happens were beginning sentences get cut off or its not the same lay out as it is in my document. sigh again i am sorry i think its because of my crap computer and /or i'm still just not that use to the site. I will get better promise. TY for the review!! :D
Date: 06-22-12 - 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 6
Dang!!! Fantastic. A A
Date: 06-22-12 - 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 5
Okay, it's official...I thoroughly hate Logan right now. He doesn't even deserve her even though I know this is a RoLo, I want justice for Storm and a good ass kicking to come for Logan. A A lol
Date: 06-22-12 - 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 4
Jean and Logan are just sickening, excuse me while I go throw up a lot. What is it about Scott that makes me just want to slap him upside the head to help him grow a pair and get some sense. Oh well, enough writing from me on to the next chapter. If you can't tell I am enthralled.
Date: 06-22-12 - 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 3
Wonderful job painting Logan as a total jerk so far. Storm and Remy are really endearing in this, I like that you have kept some of their dynamic. A A
Date: 06-22-12 - 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 2
Anxious to read the next chapter, all I can say is wow. A A
Date: 06-22-12 - 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hating Jean, Loving Rogue and Remy, just barely tolerating Logan, mention of Betsy and Scott ehh. What can I say.....Loving this. : ) A A
Date: 06-17-12 - 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 6
Nice. A few minor errors, but this story is really good and original.

Date: 06-14-12 - 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 6
Yeah! I'm so happy you finally took the plunge and came over! Welcome!
I have been waiting with baited breath for your next update!!!

Date: 06-14-12 - 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh I'm so glad you brought your story over here.I was really loving it at fanfiction but I'm excited that I get to read it over on this site with all the other great stories. Please update soon. :)