

Date: 06-19-14 - 01:46 am Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! Please update the sequel!
Date: 05-30-14 - 11:27 am Title: Chapter 14
awesome story i really enjoyed it thanks for the read

Date: 11-07-13 - 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 14
How in the heck did I miss this story?? I loved it. The slow progression of them barely tolerating each other to friends to aomething more pwas amazing!!

Date: 10-17-13 - 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 14
Oh my goodness...that was truly an awesome story!!! I love how you write the couple. Truly a great first fic.
Date: 10-17-13 - 12:04 am Title: Chapter 2
LMBO.....loving the back and forth.
Logan and Bobby and him worried about the laundry schedule...hilarious!

Date: 01-07-13 - 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
I agree with Marbles there needs to be a sequel or another story by you. You wrote Ororo and Logan perfectly.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for saying that!
Yes, there will be a sequel in the foreseeable future... just don't hold your breath.
And, YEAH! I wanted to write another story. Working on that now, to be honest.
Hope you'll continue your support and review it.

Date: 01-07-13 - 09:05 am Title: Chapter 14
I READ THIS IN ONE SITTING AND BY THE END I HAD CAVITIES I HOPE YOU'RE HAPPY
ugh no but seriously what a great fic. logan and ororo have a fantastic friendship, one that is built on trust and similarities that go deeper than what most people see in them at face value and often people forget that in favor of writing straight up romance. I love that this was written as them getting to know each other first, accepting each other's pasts and flaws (he still smokes and swears and drinks his beer and baits Scott and she still befriended him; she is emotionally closed up and didn't want to let him in and he coaxed her out of her shell and do you know how beautiful that is? that's beautiful, man! D8)
my only nitpick: you never mentioned her lovely house-to-be again!
--- clearly it's a way for you to squeeze in a sequel, aha.
just... you go, babs. four for you, babs. definitely write more for this!!
Author's Response: haha! thanks for the thorough review; I really appreciate it.Not enough people care about their friendship and immediately fall into their sex life and that's not relationships work; there's gotta be communication.
And because you're so perceptive, I have to admit, there are obvious holes because I wanted to keep writing. Like the mark on her skin, how he never told her about his dream, and just the regular aftermath stuff.
So!-- fret not, there will be a sequel. Just... don't hold your breath, I am a college student. *shrugs sheepishly*

Date: 01-05-13 - 03:11 am Title: Chapter 1
Loved the story. Thank you, I really like chapter 12. We got to experience more depth to Logan's character and true values.

Date: 01-05-13 - 02:07 am Title: Chapter 13
Thanks very much for an Awesome read!

Date: 01-03-13 - 01:52 am Title: Chapter 1
This is a nice story you should continue.
Author's Response: thanks! I'm glad you like my story.

Date: 01-02-13 - 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 3
Please update soon!
Author's Response: new chapter's up now. Thanks for the continued support! It feeds the muse.

Date: 01-01-13 - 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful story!
Author's Response: thanks!

Date: 01-01-13 - 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like the story so far and can't wait to read more. Very well written. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: awesome! I hope I can hold your interest.