
Date: 01-01-14 - 10:55 am Title: Epi-Prologue
I enjoyed reading this fic. Was a lot of fun. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 05-29-12 - 05:04 am Title: Epi-Prologue
fun story i really enjoyed it.
Date: 05-28-12 - 06:12 pm Title: Hot and Cold
cool first chapter liked it alot =)

Date: 03-01-08 - 10:35 pm Title: Epi-Prologue
Oh wicked. I loved this last little part. Thanks for this BW. Off to read and review more of your great writing.

Date: 03-01-08 - 08:58 pm Title: Epilogue
Heya...
Yeah this chapter definitely wants me to see a prologue to the story. I paticularly can't wait until they find out about the baby. So if Wolvie found out first he'd have to first deal with the fact he's going to be a dad. I wonder how he found out it was twins...was it automatic or did he later find out it might be twins of course still be Ro. He'd definitely have his own issues of abandonment to think of when he takes up the role as dad. Then we have to look at Ro's side and then dealing with telling Wolvie and see if she's come to trust him as a life long (long term) partner...not just the man she's bedding.
Part two is going to be amazing to read and I totally enjoyed this read BW. I hope you take up writing again.

Date: 03-01-08 - 08:12 pm Title: Secret's Out
hiya...you so have to touch on this in part two the fact that they got married and definitely how Wolverine reacted to the pregnancy and how STormy reacted, but also you need to touch on the apartment and how Storm came to find out about it.
This makes sit on the edge of my seat for part two since this chapter and the fighting chapter opens a lot of doors to how S/W got together and things happened.

Date: 03-01-08 - 08:04 pm Title: Midday Getaway
Hmm....so everyone will be privy to the truth tomorrow, great news.
As for the love scenes...these things are unmatchable. Lovin' them.

Date: 03-01-08 - 05:19 pm Title: Morning After
Hah, Jubie-bean's grandma would jump Wolverine. I think all women and a few men would jump Wolverine---that doesn't mean they'd make it out alive. In any event, this chappie was good... but damn Scott is like Jerk with an exponent in this story.
Latas.

Date: 03-01-08 - 04:09 pm Title: Cooling Down
To be exact, it's three children at the mall. In any event, this was a cool chappie. I'm sure the others are wondering what Storm/Wolverine are up to...I'm sure if Scott new he'd have an apoplectic fit. ^_^
Great chappy.

Date: 03-01-08 - 01:19 pm Title: Fight Night
I really liked this chapter. You do know that Wolvie needs his own bike though... He could do better than Scott's bike.

Date: 03-01-08 - 01:02 pm Title: S**t hits the fan
Heya...both Jean and Scott are presumptuous idiots with a lot of nerve. Storm should have fried them for that one. I'm surprised Wolverine wasn't a bit more hard on them than he was....
Sigh, those two need to get on a honeymoon and focus on their lovelife instead of poking their business on others who have a better sex life. They sound like old biddies, who love to jump to conclusions.

Date: 03-01-08 - 12:45 pm Title: Phone Call
No worries about the short chapter. I enjoyed it, despite my man looking ...or better yet, sounding like an idiot. Wolvie had to put him in his place, he was totally out of whack. Just nother great chapter.
Can't wait until this baby thing hits the fan.

Date: 03-01-08 - 12:31 pm Title: At the mall
Although I've read the story several times before I'm so happy to be reading it again. I lov the moments between Storm and Wolvie and it's cool to see the change in Wolvie because of Storm and the occupants of the house.
Damn that Jean...sneaking into Stormie's brain like that.

Date: 03-01-08 - 10:32 am Title: Sat-“Ugh”-Day
Fantastic chapter. Although I do have to say, why do you always have this need in turning Scott into a jerk?! Scott's alright, I'll have you know. But this was a cool chapter, jean is a bit presumptuous about the Wolverine/Storm relationship----she gives me the impression she's pushing them more together because then she can pretend she actually likes the pairing if it becomes a reality. Love "giggle-dumps'.

Date: 03-01-08 - 05:44 am Title: Early Mornings
Not much to add since this was just a filler sort of ep on how Jean deals with the aftermath of her little fantasy.
I loved Wolvie describing Jean's arousal as "spiking". Overall a good piece and I can't wait until the fight scene. Great chapter from a great writer.