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Reviewer: LadyOroro Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-21-08 - 12:50 pm Title: Betrayal And More Lies

Wow!! this story is intriguing me!!
I hope to read more about this!!! *_* ^^
kiss!!!

Reviewer: sinisterkamui Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-11-05 - 04:50 pm Title: Betrayal And More Lies

odd little pairing x-men and the shadow king and as much of an ass as i think one eye is this seems alittle much i hope xavier doesnt go along with this and i hope someone kicks the shit out of one eye

Author's Response: there will defo be some ass kicking! Odd pairing? the shadow king was the man how took storm off the streets as a kid and tought her to be a theif till Xavier took her out of all that. Xavier dont know Ororo is any harm, as far as he knows she outta the country in africa

Reviewer: Windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-11-05 - 04:28 pm Title: Betrayal And More Lies

Ok, so Scott put her aside so she wouldn't get hurt by the Shadow King? Or is he double crossing? Hmmm....interesting update. More soon, i hope.

Author's Response: Scoot was the one who took storm into the warehouse. But he's seems to have told Xavier a different story

Reviewer: Jamie B. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-11-05 - 03:22 pm Title: Deception

That sneaky little Scott! He is up to no good and putting Ororo in danger at the same time. I wonder who he was talking to on the phone and why he has Ro involved. Good start to an interesting story!

Reviewer: Windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-11-05 - 07:50 am Title: Deception

Oooooooohhhhh.....I can see a good story building here! Update soon. :D I'm intrigued as to what's going on.

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-10-05 - 09:47 pm Title: Deception

Nice start. You may wanna have a beta reader to just try and catch the few spelling errors, but other than that, nice start.

Reviewer: serial_charmer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-10-05 - 06:43 pm Title: Deception

oooo i'm liking this one, so far. sneaky sneaky scott...

Reviewer: BW Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12-10-05 - 06:24 pm Title: Deception

Just one thing....don't delay with the next update...now NOW....Pleaaassssseee!!

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