I know not every fic has to be moonlight and roses for these two, thus the beauty of creative freedom, but wow ::blinks:: lol. Although in many ways they're both being quite obtuse.

Author's Response: They are...aren't they. Its a thing of the heart being in the right place, but the mind doing tricks.

Finally a chapter that makes sense, and now I can think through...

Now this is my question....Is Storm marrying Logan in name only? Meaning that their only marrying each other to protect their children. I know sinister was always after the children of the Summers', and then we have Kendall and James possibly being in danger, like Kendall once was.


Now as for both Logan and 'Ro, I can't blame either. I just can't see how they can't understand each other's side..mainly Logan to Ro.

You see with Logan his is straight forward. He wants to kill those bastards, but I think what he forgets and what Storm knows, is that you kill them won't stop them. We will always be a liability....so what do you think your doing?! I think Storm is trying to convey, if you know that they'll be after you for the past 24 years, you don't think that they'll always be after our children?!

He's so stupid. I understand his anger levels, but come on. One moment, I'll stray off topic and go to the part of the ring buying. I'm surprised you wrote Storm as the one surprised by just walking away.....if it was Cycke I'd see him surprised, but not 'Ro, she's his wife, she knows him best....so that's a bit unbelievable to me. I mean I was surprised in Wolverine confronting them in public with his kids in tow, which was off..but I wouldn't be surprised by him just walkign away. He wouldn't go that far with the kids..which is why I wondered why he'd go to confronting them there...in the first place.

Back on topic. Anyway yeah I relate more to Storm. Wolverine is a dick..and always will be..and I'm surprised that the other girls especially Jubes doesnn't see that. Where was Wolverine to comfort Storm? He didn't take any of Storm's emotion's into consideration, he completely disregarded, wheather she was going through her own things.

And further more...let's look at this. I mean, to first discredit your wifes emotions, and then to leave. You just came out of getting your child back adn your already on your way out!? To me that says his family is second best...becasue a man would realise that his family is weakened right now..he needs to be there, to protect and any moment o fhim gone for a long period of time anything can happen. It happened the first time and you were on duty and now you leave..you've just made it worse.

He's a twat. Now Stormy....I understand her need for an ultimatum, she thought she could keep him with her..but obviously not evne his family's needs were more important than raging his revenge. And yet, it's Storm who's evil!

Damn it to hell. Her own daughter hates her. He walked out on them for his own needs...not really his family's.

peace...can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: See, Wolverine is after all, part man and part beast, and when he is angry, the beast is up....so lashing-n'-slashing. And why is Storm who is evil? I didn't say that.

huh?

WHAT!!!! NO NOT NO WAY!!! GRRRRRRR your so in the dog house if you think that's going to fly.

Author's Response: It is flying....n' riding the winds of...uh, change!!

Man there are some situations that Wolverine does not let the kids be brought into..this is one of those situations. what is wrong with that fool?

He's just fanning the fires, and making it worse. And I was right the first time, it had to be Cycke, but me thinking this is not another Cleansing...well then I was like Beast.

Dude what are you getting at with this? This chapter also says nothing to use, than that wolverine is willing to get into a fight with his kids present. And he's a twat?!

Why do I also get the feeling that Scott is using this as a way to get the family he's always wanted...Surprising he wasn't more vocal when Kendall was having her episode...

And why in the end do you like playing with Ro...marrying the wrong man, after what one man did to her....I don't know!

VB

Author's Response: *Fanning the Fires*....is he now? You don't know the whole story yet. And, hey, isn't Scott the good guy here? Or is he, as you say 'the wrong man'?

Whaaa...?! Ewww! This is so not... omg. This is so not right! Ugh... *retches*
Who in her (or his ;) ) right state of mind would choose stick-in-his-ass-Scooter over sexy-wild-untamed-manly-hot-sexy-hairy-(...)-Logan?!
This can't be happening... Has to be one of Logan's nightmares or maybe Scott's wishful thinking or something...
*shudders*
What are you up to here? Heh :)

Nope. No hate--Just mild irritation over the repeated depictation of Storm as the villianess. Let's recap...She's marrying T'Challa in one of your fics...Being a complete bitch in this one...and oh yeah, Cleansing...do i even have to go there. I know, I know, you're loyalty lies with Wolverine.

Author's Response: She isn't a bitch in this one. Even in Cleansing, she wasn't. Although, in FH, I'll agree, but that's Marvel Canon. What else do you expect? Anyways, keep on reading....and just as in Cleansing, don't make your mind so soon. Remember Scott was the 'good' guy there. Everyone, incl. you felt sorry for him....in the beginning!! ::rubs hands and snickers in an evil manner::