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Reviewer: Andria Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02-21-06 - 11:26 pm Title: Dark Conversation

A little over the top for me. Not to get you upset but I read several of your stories and some are good, others seem as though you wrote them without much thought reusing plot lines used before. I really think you should work on quality not quanity.

Author's Response: What can I say...maybe I lack imagination. Anyways, thanks for the good stuff and apologies for the disppointments!!

Reviewer: thesupernugget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-21-06 - 09:36 pm Title: Dark Conversation

WHOA! he doesn't die. would he heal even through the drunkenness? or can he just *will* himself to die?

Author's Response: *Will* himself to die...now where did I read that one?

Reviewer: alex Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-21-06 - 05:10 pm Title: Family Ties

right...he can't die....
so...what?
why he had to do something so stupid?

Author's Response: Well...Logan + Drunk + more Logan = Recipe for Stupidity!!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-21-06 - 02:53 pm Title: Dark Conversation

This is killing me you know. He's hurting so much :( And so is she.
And now what? Is he lying on the mansion grounds, in a dent in the shape of his body? I mean, he can't really be dead so... hm. What was the purpose this? Was he trying to get something out of Ro? Some sort or reaction? Anything?
I wish they could just start from scratch... put everything that happened aside and give their relationship another chance.

Author's Response: Well, like the saying goes...you can't go back home!! (or whatever it is). But more coming up!!

Reviewer: thesupernugget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-19-06 - 01:46 am Title: Love Contorted

they still love each other right? I mean ororo and logan, and scott and jean

Author's Response: What do you think? After all, Jean is out of the way!!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-18-06 - 11:15 am Title: Love Contorted

*sigh* Those memories where sweet. Bittersweet when looking from the present situation.
Can't wait for the next chapter! I hope to find out more on this whole Scott/Ro thing (even though I don't like the pairing :) ). And what's Logan up to?

Author's Response: The Scott-'Ro *thing*, although not a main pair of this story, will get more screen time!!

Reviewer: chyti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-17-06 - 12:14 pm Title: Pain and Hurt

what is up with all the attitudes and why is neither one of them trying to understand the other.

Author's Response: All in good time.....I haven't revealed everything yet!!

Reviewer: sinisterkamui Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-17-06 - 10:44 am Title: Pain and Hurt

an update is coming though right

Author's Response: Yup. Should have it up by the evening!!

Reviewer: ebony8302eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-20-06 - 08:01 pm Title: Pain and Hurt

Love it please update soon!

Author's Response: The next update is on its way. Regret the delay. Wanted to get 'Dreams' completed.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-17-06 - 09:18 am Title: Pain and Hurt

She actually fried him? Wow... Can't blaim the girl for her feelings and actions towards her mom. Not after what she saw and what she made of it. I can't believe Ro didn't go to her after it happened but turned away instead. Yeah, to get Hank, but still... The kid just saw her mommy electrocuting her daddy!
And Logan is in her room now? What does he mean by "she got what she always wanted"?
This Ro and Logan are not the ones I know... Okay, Logan maybe. He really can be like this but Ro? I don't know. She's so... I can't describe it.
Can't wait for the next chapter though :)

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-17-06 - 08:56 am Title: Circles and Triangles

Kendall really is a daddies girl. Everything he says and does is holy, heh. Ro's really having a hard time with her.
Scott and Ro... do they love each other? Just wondering. Ever since the last chapter, when they were about to "go their separate ways" after returning from the mall, I've been thinking about this. It just doesn't seem like it...

Reviewer: thesupernugget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-16-06 - 08:53 pm Title: Pain and Hurt

dun dun dun
THE PLOT THICKENS!!
she never really loved him did she

Reviewer: hnyswtypie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-16-06 - 07:53 pm Title: Pain and Hurt

Okay, now I can understand Kendall's animosity towards her mother. You did a great job of explaining.

I think this is my fav chapter so far.

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-16-06 - 05:15 pm Title: Pain and Hurt

Thanks for clearing up a lot of the situations, so we finally know what happened before Wolverine left which was a prelude to the what is gong on now. And we also know the resulting divorce.

Too me wolverine was putting his family in dnager when he left, that is intentionally or not. And to discount his wifes emotions and then just walk in like everythign is okay. She doesn't need that on top of everythign else.

I find Wolverine rather unspportive and used pretty much as a pack mare, since to me, I'm wondering if he wanted her or wants her as a trophy, something to fill in his time and days. Or if he wants her as in loves her. Sorry to question, but he's not showing me a man in love,l but a fairly selfish bastard.

Hopefully the next chapter will clear things up...

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-16-06 - 05:09 pm Title: Circles and Triangles

Hmmm....didnt' even know about this chapter. Was when I was reading the last chapter, I discovered that I was missing somethign and found this one.


Well I figured that both Scott an Ro were just marrying each other to sort create some balance of a familial life for the kids, and not really as an in-love pair, and also a level of protection for them. At least with Scott, Storm would be an equal partner and she wouldn't have to deal with him running off for shit. And in Scott's case he has an admirable woman/mother for his chidlren and also she won't die on him like 50 times.

Hopefully Wolverine and Storm find their way back to one another and I hope all the misunderstandings are cleared up. It looks like the only person who knows the truth is Storm, and Wolverine had no problem not fixing the situation between her and Rogue/jubilee, which I found off.

He should have at least told them what is really going and why Storm did what she did..bu then again maybe Wolverine doesn't know, because he chooses not too.

Wolverine is in dire need of character development in this story. Much like Cleansing he's still a prick.
VB

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