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Reviewer: persnikitty5 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06-27-12 - 02:29 pm Title: on the couch

i hope you continue this story!

Reviewer: RoMo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-03-08 - 01:50 pm Title: on the couch

It would be more enjoyable, if I didn't have to try to figure out who's saying what. First thing one learns with writing stories and dialogue is that everytime someone speaks, you start a new paragraph. It really helps the reader to understand the story better.

Reviewer: thesupernugget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-11-06 - 08:15 pm Title: on the couch

ha ha rogue's a peeping tom! i like this one better than your other ff

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