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Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-02-06 - 11:30 pm Title: Happily ever after

Good ending. Just read this after reading the first two chaps of your new piece. Noticed Jesha is in the new one! Cool.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-30-06 - 12:06 am Title: the Statues.

Good. You did well writing Gambit in character.

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Date: 07-29-06 - 09:13 pm Title: The beggining

Not bad. Not bad at all. Gotta work on the spellings and some punctuation, but this was a great story because it was creative, had a great original character, and made good use of the entire cast, everyone got some relevant dialogue.

This sentence was one of my favorites:

“Hecka good. How do you think it felt?”

Get back to work! Write us some more stories!!!

CeeCee ;-)

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Date: 07-10-06 - 12:15 pm Title: A silent confession

Nice last line. Run with that.

Might wanna change exasperatingly for exasperatedly, so it's Logan running his hands through his hair, feeling exasperated, not exasperating other people with the gesture. Other than that, I enjoyed this.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-08-06 - 11:33 am Title: Time warp

Exciting plot twists. I'm enjoying this story. I love Moira MacTaggert, so having her in this story is a good thing.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-07-06 - 03:58 pm Title: Living at the Xmansion

All right. You've got me hooked! I'm interested to find out more about who Jesha's parents are. Nifty powers, too.

Author's Response: I am glad I can keep you hooked, thanks for reading!!!!!!!! YEAH! You made my day and reviews give me incentive to write more.

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Date: 07-06-06 - 12:50 pm Title: Tears unseen

Interesting beginning. I like the part about the microbrew! Especially since where I live has its own microbrewery. There is a spot where your spell check changed a "darlin'" to "darling" that could be fixed, and there's funny verb usage with "seep" (the warmth can "seep out of her body into the wall," but the wall would not necessarily "seep the warmth out of her body", the wall would "drain the warmth out of her body).

But yeah, other than that, this is a fantastic piece. Hope my wordy review doesn't annoy you...keep updating. This is good stuff.

Reviewer: Sango2 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-06-06 - 11:18 am Title: Tears unseen

Good start, is there more?. ;)

Author's Response: Yeah! of coruse there's more. :) Enjoy them let me know what you think.

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