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Reviewer: cbreezes82 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-17-06 - 09:49 pm Title: Get to it already

I can't wait to read more in this story! Hurry and post again soon.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-11-06 - 09:03 am Title: The Fire Within

"youthful." Uh-huh. Sure!

Good chapter. Neat seeing different characters' reactions to Logan. Also neat seeing Jean and Scott having an argument in character.

Author's Response: Well, I can't have someone like Xavier saying 'horny', can I? As for Jean and Scott, I decided to let up on Scooter...atleast for now. However, as shown by the last line, he's back to being the mansion bi*ch!!

Reviewer: feisteey Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-09-06 - 11:16 pm Title: The Fire Within

I like! I like! But... (and maybe this is just me being picky) umm Ororo was shot in the last chapter, pretty damn near close to fatally if I remember correctly. Where is everyone's concern about her well being (especially Jean, Scott & Xavier), I need some tears, some awkward beside manner, a candle light vigil... okay maybe that's pushing it :)

I await impatiently for your next chapter.


Author's Response: Noticed that, did ya? Well, feisteey one, you'll be glad to know that there is a lot going behind the scenes (as it is here that the AU in AU Movieverse comes into play). ALL in the next chapter...after all, Ororo isn't the only one waking up.

Reviewer: sinisterkamui Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-07-06 - 11:15 pm Title: Going Down

really like the changes is this chapter i hope that u write wolverine like this for the next few chapters he got kinda soft in the original

great as always

Author's Response: Hey sinister!! No softing here (atleast I hope not)...after all its an AU Movieverse (and I don't include that wimpy X3 in that)

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-07-06 - 11:02 pm Title: Going Down

Such a stark difference, I love it. Can't wait to see all the damage he's gonna do to the school!

Author's Response: T'anks Reiko. Hopefully, 'this' Logan will continue as such (and not become tame). Also, have made a quite a few changes in the whole Forge dynamic...though haven't quite decided how n' where to place him. Lets see how things work out.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-07-06 - 10:36 pm Title: Going Down

Jean's just gonna let the guy crawl away? Wow. She really is a pansy!

I enjoy Logan in this one. He's a real hard ass.

Author's Response: Aah, you got Logan. (Thank god). I am trying to set him differently from the one in 'Dreams'. After all, he did just escape, and more than that, just finished killing quite a few f'ers. Hence his behavior n' comments. As for Jean...well, 'The X-Men don't kill.'

Reviewer: Rising Phoenix Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-04-06 - 07:17 pm Title: X-Men Rescue…d!!

Hey,...you got us at the edge of our seats here!!!!!!!

Please update soon!!!!

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-04-06 - 05:00 pm Title: X-Men Rescue…d!!

Still picturing Logan wearing his tighty whities on the outside...wa ha ha ha.

Good banter between Bobby and Kitty. Fix the spelling of her codename to "Ariel." It was actually her second codename, even though in the beginning of the first Morlocks story arc, she said she always wished she had chosen Ariel as her codename after she took the name Sprite. That much I remember from that storyline in mainline books. But what the heck, details, details...

Good to see you back up and running!

Author's Response: Will correct the spelling mistake, and as for the jumble up b/w the names, let them be as they are. After all, even if was unintentional, it did set it apart (even if a little) from the comicverse. N' good to be back.

Reviewer: KrystalNic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-25-06 - 12:14 pm Title: Past Participant

Would Logan meet Ororo in the next chapter?
I am looking forward for it~!^^~

Author's Response: We'll see. With the changed setting (from the first fic), you never know.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-25-06 - 12:02 pm Title: Past Participant

Your narrative is improving, this read really smoothly, without being too dialogue-intensive (since you mentioned earlier that you feared having too much dialogue and not enough story). This is well-balanced.

I like ororo's mental dialogue with herself, and laughed about the "wake up and smell the men" comment. That was cool.

Author's Response: Glad u liked the comment. Seems to me that my 'angst' mood has taken a back seat (though its still very much there) allowing me to take some comedic liberties.

Reviewer: sinisterkamui Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-23-06 - 07:14 pm Title: Perchance to Dream…

was a real fan of the original glad you rewrote it cant wait for more

Author's Response: Thanks. Hope to get ur feedback to let me know if this one turns better.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-23-06 - 04:55 pm Title: Perchance to Dream…

Great dialogues, as usual.

Good to see Ororo acting a litle naughty in her dreams, as she should.

Author's Response: Thanks. Though not much, I did change a few things in this chapter to make it more....hot!!

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