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Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-31-07 - 11:16 am Title: Just a precaution

Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-07-06 - 11:53 pm Title: The Ball

Okay, I am moving backwards. What I enjoy about your stories is the fun dialogue, and taking Ororo out of her usual, orderly little box. Her personality is looser and more playful, which is a nice departure.

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Date: 10-07-06 - 11:49 pm Title: Matadors

I came in late. Unique story. Who is Tyler? Cable's son, or an original character? I need to go back and read some of this, but I thought I would ask.

Author's Response: hes the mArquis of spain actually.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-30-06 - 02:59 am Title: Wisp of smoke

I'm not a fan of OC's though I love the way she talks. I like the imagery as well and I really, really love the title. It's the title that kept pulling me back to this story as I browsed through the recent stories. That said I'm so far behind in my reading that I may not be able to finish this any time soon but I just had to let you know how much I like the title not to mention the last line.

Reviewer: Layla Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-19-06 - 02:15 am Title: As mysterious as the night

Great stuff please continue.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-02-06 - 11:24 pm Title: A coffee Date

"It's complicated, Ororo." Sounds good. I'm hooked. Keep this going.

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Date: 09-02-06 - 11:20 pm Title: Wisp of smoke

Neat beginning. Neat character. Watch the punctuation. Good verb usage. I like the visual that I get from this prose. Good work, kid.

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