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Reviewer: Crimsonsin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-30-07 - 04:24 pm Title: Budding Friendship Leads To Broken Walls

Both chapters 1 and 2 are great UPDATE SOON.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-29-06 - 10:38 pm Title: Confessions In The Rain

Ah, now that's a very, very good explanation as to why Logan was into Jean. Thank you! Btw, I love your pen name it's lovely.

Author's Response: Thank You Very Much !! I really liked writing his part, hope I can keep up the quailty in the up coming chapters as well ! Thanks my muse thought of it !!

Reviewer: Sango2 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-19-06 - 01:19 pm Title: Confessions In The Rain

Hope there's more to read. ;)

Author's Response: o yea there is gonna try to have to next chapter up soon, but schools holding me back ! lol thanks for reading !!

Reviewer: DefinateDancer Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-19-06 - 03:37 am Title: Confessions In The Rain

Yeeaah...Logan on a motercycle!! Good story, looks a bit cut-off, but I like it!!

Author's Response: Thanks ! yea something went woncky with my computer and some of it got cut off I'm gonna try to fix it today if not tomorrow ! I'm glad you liked it ! And yes Logan on a bike is yumminess !

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-18-06 - 11:38 pm Title: Confessions In The Rain

Looks like a teeny piece of the closing sentence got cut off. Was it supposed to be "Darlin', I don't say anything I don't really mean"? Kinda looked like it, at first read.

Logan's little soliloquy to 'Ro is great because there is a lot of passion and knowledge of himself in it, but a lot of it would have also been good as internal monologue, too, if you didn't already have it as words he speaks to her out loud. But whatever. Promising story, I want to read more, please! The motorcycle ride is fun. Logan on a bike is always fun!

Author's Response: Thanks !! Im glad you liked it, I spent the most on Logans part. wanted to really make it seem true to his character. Im glad you liked it and I got it ! yay lol and yes logan on a bike is always fun, fun to picture and would be fun to join !

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