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Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-31-07 - 11:42 am Title: chapter 4

Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-11-06 - 10:40 pm Title: chapter 1

This story has potential. It does, however, already resemble a lot of other stories with Logan and Gambit, so keeping the plot cohesive and original will be challenging, and I wish you well with that. A language barrier isa tricky thing to work around, so kudos for writing a story in English. English is hard; I majored in it in school. Let me know if you need a beta.

Author's Response: Thank you, sweetie, for your review. I will let you know, if need beta...I think i need it now :)

Reviewer: salad Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-11-06 - 10:18 pm Title: chapter 1

i agree with Pari.. i got lost halfway through the story. it's an interesting story... but i couldnt finish it cos i got too confused.

Author's Response: I'm sorry for my awful English. And thank you for your review.

Reviewer: Pari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-10-06 - 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 2

Question, Is this being translated from another language? I am enjoying the story though it is a bit hard to follow at times, seems to be in 1st & 3rd persons, and all the tenses; past, present, and future *You have to stick with one tense throughout*. It a good story but I'd recommend getting a beta, to make it fantastic :)

Author's Response: Yes, it was translated from another language. From Russian. I'm trying to improve my English, bit it is so hard sometimes... Thank you for your reviews, Pari :)

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