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Reviewer: CeeCee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-05-07 - 09:27 pm Title: With my eyes closed

Classic. I love her explanation to him. Very cute.

And he had the advantage, being behind her to see her workout gear!! Good story.

Author's Response: Believe it our not learned that information in my yoga class in college. I'm sure he did enjoy the view even though she beat him.

Reviewer: Pari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-21-07 - 12:42 am Title: The Thunder Rolled

I did enjoy it, though it is a bit difficult to read, spacng would have made it more enjoyable for me.

Author's Response: Took your advice and it worked so much better. Thank you.

Reviewer: orororo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-13-07 - 03:48 am Title: Help Me

wow. i like the interaction between rolo. hehehe
"how are you at money?" lol logan budgeting...that's one thing i wouldn't wanna miss lol ;)

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-12-07 - 11:20 pm Title: Help Me

I like that last line, and the one he made about talking to yourself being one of the first signs of losing your mind. Cute!

The dialogue is getting stronger, which is good. I also like how you have a section of exposition for Logan's inner reflections, and then a separate one for Ororo's. It's funny seeing how much she has on her desk!

Author's Response: I just let her borrow mine for a minute. I think all teachers have a messy desk some time or another. Thanks for the good review

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-31-07 - 10:56 pm Title: Prologue~ Just Stay

Bringing Charles into Logan's dream was a unique angle, since we saw Logan being pretty broken up about him being killed in that scene (which is one of my favorites). I love the title of this story, and it drew my attention easily to want to read it. Keep it coming.

Author's Response: I felt that was the most emotional scene in the whole movie. You can thank Sugarland for the title. One of my favorite songs and it was while listening to it I came up with the ide of the story.

Reviewer: Ang Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-31-07 - 09:37 pm Title: Prologue~ Just Stay

One word.... Nice. I can't wait to see what happens to these two.

Reviewer: rolletti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-31-07 - 07:27 pm Title: Prologue~ Just Stay

Oooo scarry and sad dream for Logan, he's always tormented. Nice beginning here and you are keeping the characters true to form. Good job.

Rolletti

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