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Reviewer: Voli23 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-06-07 - 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 5

Well, I'll admit I was skeptical of this story at first, but your plot line and writing skills prove me wrong; I'm hooked. :) Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Im very glad that i could win ya over :)

Reviewer: angel24buffy Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-06-07 - 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 4

I love this story. I can't wait for the next chapter. These four chapters have lots of energy and action. Hopefully, you will post the next chapter very soon.

Author's Response: Thank ya kindly the next few chapters will be coming quickly the bones are laid for them just got to add the meat to them

Reviewer: VenomQueen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-06-07 - 01:01 am Title: Chapter 4

This is kick ass, like a mix of Highlander, lord of the Rings and Hercules all in one. This is really great stuff.

Author's Response: Thank ya much as a matter of fact my inspiration for Logan in this came form a scene of highlander. The first shot of Kurgen on his horse was just to bad ass

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-05-07 - 11:01 am Title: Chapter 4

Damn. Pierce killed Sam!!!!

Lots of young casualties already! I'm already worried Logan and the "Haze" he's feeling, but I can't wait to see what happens next. Magnus sounds pretty evil, too. Bring it on!

Author's Response: Ole Magnus is gonna be a mother in this i kid you not lol. I shall bring it

Reviewer: mx Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-04-07 - 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 3

this is great! can't wait for more

Author's Response: you shall have it thank ya kindly :)

Reviewer: Ang Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-04-07 - 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 3

Once again Bravo!!!

Author's Response: :bows: thank ya much :)

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-04-07 - 11:10 am Title: Chapter 3

I LOVE THIS! Kitty and Logan fighting side by side as siblings is one more reason why I love this story. Remy offering the foot massage is cool, too, and in character!

Reviewer: OroroHowlett Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-03-07 - 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 2

Cool! I like this a lot with the whole lotr feel to it and fantasy element and u update so fast!!

Reviewer: OroroHowlett Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-03-07 - 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

LOVE THIS!!!!

Author's Response: thank you very much im glad people are diggin it

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-03-07 - 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 2

I love the character names, and I enjoyed Bishop's reaction to Ororo last chapter. Also, what's a halberd? I know some medieval terms just from reading Conan novels for years, but that one escapes me. This story is creative and moves at a good pace, making me ask "what's gonna happen next?" as you add more to it. Keep watching the punctuation, and let me know if you need a beta. The paragraph spacing is much nicer, too, by the way.

Author's Response: thank ya much Cee :) I would be more than happy if would like ot beta these, but i am new to fan fiction so i am not sure how to go about it lol and Pari opened my eyes to the spacing, i wasnt thinking. A halberd is a pike type weapon. it has the shaft of a spear but the head of a axe with a curved blade on the back of the head and a long point on top. they were used mainly to dismount calvary but guards were known to use them as well

Reviewer: mx Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-03-07 - 09:47 am Title: Chapter 1

love the update! I can't wait for another one

Author's Response: they be coming fast as i can make the ideas click

Reviewer: Ang Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-02-07 - 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

Okay, I'm hooked. What's next????!!

Author's Response: lol a whole lot of hell

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