Awww, that's sad, but sweet. I like the way she gave him honesty but tried really hard to protect his feelings. Forge was being pretty cool about it, since he was kinda jealous when he saw her fussing over Logan. Good stuff. More, please.

This story is getting good. Please post teh next chapter ASAP.

Looks like trouble for Forge and Logan over the horizon! the banter between logan and Ororo was cute. I like how you've written logan to be pretty charming, something we don't see from him that often in fic. Good work.

This is really, really good. I like the scene between Scott and Ororo where both of them are confronting each other, eyes glowing. Great moment in a great chapter.

My heart is about to explode in my chest wondering what happens next. UPDATE SOON!!!

I love the story line.

This is a well-written story, and it stays on track; it's very focused on the plot without any redundancy or beating the usual theme of Ororo and Logan as a couple who can't quite come together over the head. Ororo's dream was a neat twist to bring to the table. I like that Rogue and Gambit are Ororo's close friends in this story. It was nice that you posted four chapters at once, too. Instant gratification, getting to read this much of the story instead of just a piece at a time. Keep it coming!

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. I have about 14 chaps ready to post but I wanted to do it in batches since I'm not done with the fic yet so keeping reading!!