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Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-05-09 - 07:07 pm Title: Devices

This is really good. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: I am glad you are enjoying it. I am really bad at responding to review sorry man. Thanks. Please read and review more!

Reviewer: T'kween Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-04-09 - 06:05 pm Title: Traps


LOL. This is neat. I love the little historical bits you added; very up to date and correct!
Looking foward to an update.

Curious and Curious... is our Johnathan Proudstar really Forge in disguise?

Author's Response: Could be.. You'll just have to read more!! I am glad you like the history, I will be adding more as I go along.

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-07-09 - 02:11 pm Title: Traps

“Proudstar pay attention. I’m translating and you’re falling behind, stop looking at my ass.” Jonathan laughed a deep throaty laugh.

Okay, that was cute.


Author's Response: Oh Good I am glad you like it please continue to read and review.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-05-09 - 11:31 pm Title: A Job

the first chapter with the snakes tickled me, totally reminded me of the original Raiders of the Lost Ark movie, so this chapter made me smile. Three mil? That's some nice cheese.

Author's Response: If only we could make that kind of money and do a fun job like this...

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-05-09 - 12:11 pm Title: Cross my heart..

Very good start!! Looking forward to this story it sounds great update soon.

Author's Response: Updated. :) Thanks for sticking with me.

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-04-09 - 08:35 pm Title: Cross my heart..

Cute. I'm laughing at the visual of Rogue doing the sprinkler. So Adrienne is a telepath/telekinetic?

Author's Response: Umm not sure exactly. basically she can manipulate all organic and some inorganic matter at the nano molecular level.

Reviewer: MDancer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-16-07 - 03:55 pm Title: Stone head

I thought this chapter starting out was a little short, but I'm looking forward to others coming. You write nicely, but one space between lines would make things follow a little better! Good start, keep chaps coming.

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-06-07 - 12:03 am Title: Stone head

Great chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

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