
[Report This]Date: 11-03-08 - 08:52 pm Title: Always
what a sweet ifc- i loved it- esp. logan storm fics in which they are married- teehee
[Report This]Date: 10-04-07 - 09:50 am Title: Always
That was so sweet. Very simple too, I liked it a lot.
[Report This]Date: 08-18-07 - 11:16 pm Title: Always
loved it! it's nice to have some ooey gooey sweet rolo
Author's Response: Thanks...ooey gooey works for me...!
[Report This]Date: 08-11-07 - 04:43 am Title: Always
Well, I must say it's interesting to see someone's pov of a "first time". It's a short piece but has intensity. It also embodies the same contradicting sensations of a true "first time" doesn't it? It leaves me with a feeling that consists of both passion and emptiness. Emptiness for the quickness of it, describing only the actions without true insight into the characters' inner feelings during the act. Which I think is a fantastic euphemism for the coldness and lack of profound emotions that often seem to be associated with the quickness of a first time event. But the descriptions of the act itself, what he saw and said, what she said and expected brings the cold reality of the first time act into clear and inarguable focus. Although I personally prefer to include tons of emotional connection and passion between the two... I cannot deny, in truth, that this was very nicely done. Bravo. --- W6C
Author's Response: Maybe the 'first time' has no feelings included because you just want to get it over with...
or maybe it's just the way I wrote it...hell I don't know...
Thanks for reviewing though...;P
[Report This]Date: 08-10-07 - 11:12 pm Title: Always
Nice - thanks!
Author's Response: lol, thanks...
[Report This]Date: 08-08-07 - 06:58 pm Title: Always
This piece is just so ooweey gooey sweet. I LOVED READING IT! Thanks for the sweetness
Rolletti :D
Author's Response: *Big smiles*
Thank you for a great review...;P
[Report This]Date: 08-07-07 - 08:44 pm Title: Always
Aww...that was sweet.
Author's Response: Thankies...;P
[Report This]Date: 08-07-07 - 07:19 pm Title: Always
That is one of the sweetest pieces I have read. Very passionate. Really well-written. Short yet powerful.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it...
[Report This]Date: 08-07-07 - 03:32 pm Title: Always
I don't generally review, I know bad Pari, but I don't ...However, I have to say that this is so well written, a few typos but none that takes away from the awesomeness *is that even a word?*. It was beautiful, it really truly was.
Author's Response: I haven't been practicing my writting honest!!! Thankies ; )
[Report This]Date: 08-07-07 - 02:26 pm Title: Always
It's nice for a one-shot, since it tells the whole story in just a few paragraphs. The last three paragraphs made me smile. Good job.
Author's Response: Thanks, I always look forward to reading your reviews...Thenks for the support!
