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Reviewer: CeeCee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-23-07 - 01:31 pm Title: A Chance reunion

"I'm glad we straightened that out." Man, I love that. I hope you have time soon to give us more of this story.

Author's Response: i'll try

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-23-07 - 01:42 am Title: A Chance reunion

Beautiful, classic RoLo moment the ending here. I just loved it! I'm really fascinated by Chance, what and who he really is, and looking forward to Logan's reaction when he discover's Chance is his son.

Author's Response: he already knows hehe what he does w/ that knowledge......

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-26-07 - 06:51 am Title: Once

Ahhhh! She left? No!!! Damn.
Loved this chapter! Soooo good. The banter, the love scene, everything. Mmmmhhhh, RoLo makes me happy. :D
But damn. LOL

Author's Response: only write what I know steph

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-25-07 - 06:18 pm Title: Once

she WHAT?!?!? No, no, no!! You wretch! Bring her back! Damn you. **pouts** Other than my immediate and vehement displeasure at the end of this chapter, I loved it. I was grinning with the banter, enjoying the love making and hoping the chapter wouldn't end anytime soon. **claps** :D Bravo!

Author's Response: well it was a flashback.......something to put in to explain a few things. And set the mood for the next chapter

Reviewer: CeeCee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-24-07 - 11:07 am Title: Once

Oh. My. Goodness.

Best line ever from a RoLo story:

"Storm, are you telling me you're here for a booty call?"

That had me rolling on the floor. That, and her response was classic. Priceless.

The love scene was hot without being sordid. I like the language in it, which gave detailed, pleasant images and left room for the dialogue, which was also hot. Keep this one coming.

Author's Response: thank you. Yeah I had a picture in my head of Logan on a coach with this expression on his face.

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-24-07 - 09:39 am Title: Once

Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-21-07 - 02:52 am Title: Twilight Zone

Gads, thanks for all the information about what has been going on. I had no idea. *rolls eyes* The Twilight Zone. Truer words... :D
Poor Chance. His Mom and Dad aren't even close to being together, with Ro married to... that dude, ugh. He will fix that, right? Ugh. Gah, I don't like Ro with Panther. Not at all.
But since she came back to the mansion to check on Logan gives me hope, heh. ;)
Chance needs to be careful when talking to Ro and Logan. He might just accidentally call them Mom and Dad. LOL :)

Author's Response: Thank you for looking up a few old stories I wrote as research. This is actually suppose to be a sequel to Space Opera and A Long Road... Its like tying the two together.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-21-07 - 02:49 am Title: the Teacher

Like Chance stated at the end of "Space Opera" he's there to make sure a few things will happen/not happen, right?
I just wonder why. Will we get to know the reasons why he left his own reality?
I love Logan as a teacher, especially when he teaches something that shows him intelligent, full of knowledge and well educated.

Author's Response: I promise you Steph there will be a few twists in the plot. My main thing through any of my stories is consistency. I'm glad you like the chapters. And thank you my beta Darlin.

Reviewer: Pari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-13-07 - 07:29 pm Title: Twilight Zone

It looks interesting, but the formatting made it a bit difficult to follow.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-13-07 - 07:07 am Title: Twilight Zone

Somehow the e-mail transaction didn’t work. You’ll need to double space for the bottom part. This was a good chapter, explaining a bit about Chance. I loved the twilight zone comment, how true – lol.

Reviewer: CeeCee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-12-07 - 10:14 am Title: Twilight Zone

I'm sitting here giggling. Goodness, how true, how true!! I needed the comic relief. And the rundown of all that stuff, since I haven't been reading Uncanny for a few months now. Thanks!

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-05-07 - 03:05 am Title: the Teacher

I love the description of Storm's calm voice sounding like a song upon the wind - lovely! I’m intrigued that the name of this story is called “Chance” and his last name is Howlett. Very interested in seeing where this is going. Now I love your unique take on RoLo but a beta must be found post haste. If you like I can easily go over your short chapters while at work. I always like getting advance views of your stories. It's interesting that men tend to be my favorite fan fiction writers, guess it's the unique spin you guys have with RoLo.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-30-07 - 12:47 am Title: the Teacher

Good original characters, something I don't create too often myself. I'm already looking forward to more. And I like the subject matter Logan was teaching. It's always nice to see him written as someone knowledgable and educated.

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-27-07 - 06:51 pm Title: the Teacher

Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

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