[Report This]Date: 03-09-08 - 07:14 pm Title: Five
This is a damn good story. I hope you update soon. :)
Author's Response: I updated. Thanks so much for the review..It makes me feel better after the last couple of day I've had.
[Report This]Date: 02-23-08 - 10:36 am Title: Five
HOT! HOT! HOT!
I couldn't help but giggle when she asked if he was gay. That was priceless.
Author's Response: That's one of my favorite lines! He's to masculine to be gay!
[Report This]Date: 02-23-08 - 08:39 am Title: Five
Lovely. Gimme more! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing darlin, and i'll try to update soon!
[Report This]Date: 02-20-08 - 04:54 pm Title: Five
What!! Oh, Ro's gonna do the walk of shame from Logan's room in the morning! Whooooooooooo!
I love this chapter. Betsy's awesome! The sparring, her whole "you need a drink" spiel, telling both of them to bring their baggage, all of it was perfect. This was like reading a really good chick lit novel with a cup of hot cocoa. A few grammar goofs, but very, very minor, and they didn't detract from enjoying this very, very much.
I'm mentally picturing Logan trying to push her away until he felt how close she was, and how undressed. She changed his mind, didn't she?
Author's Response: Those were two of my favorite scenes to right.
[Report This]Date: 02-20-08 - 02:14 pm Title: Five
I Love it chapter 5 was great and I know chapter 6 will be even better so update soon.
Author's Response: Aw thanks darlin. I'll try and update maybe this weekend!
[Report This]Date: 02-20-08 - 12:58 pm Title: Five
Please, please update asap! Whoo! It's a hot day on the RoLo Realm!!!
Author's Response: I'll try to do it this weekend.
[Report This]Date: 02-20-08 - 12:07 pm Title: Five
U need to update!!!
Author's Response: I know..I'll try!
[Report This]Date: 02-12-08 - 11:09 am Title: Four
MORE MORE MORE
I love it
Author's Response: Some chapters are written out. so I'm working on getting you more. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 02-11-08 - 10:50 am Title: Four
Man, poor Marie. I feel for her. Bobby and Kitty are spending so much time yanking her chain, and now she finally wants to talk!
I like the "you better get that...I better get that" moment with the phone, and him fixing her hair. Great scenes. This is good.
Author's Response: I can never understand the whole Bobby and Kitty thing. Human contact or not, its Rogue and Bobby all the way.
As for that scene...thanks. I tried...i wanted it to be more intense but i'll work on that later.
[Report This]Date: 01-12-08 - 10:20 am Title: Three
Please continue i luv this fic
Author's Response: Thanks hun, for reviewing especially since i"m new to writing RoLo fanfics!
[Report This]Date: 01-12-08 - 09:04 am Title: Three
I really like this story, Am really absorbed looking forward to more updates!
Am liking how you brough Emma into the story, it's a very intresting mix with logan, forge and Ororo. Cant wait to see how it plays out. So mnay different and conflicting feelings are brought up, really good, dont leave it too long
Author's Response: I'm actually not an Emma fan, and ever since they paired her with Scott as a foil to Jean, I've decided that Jean Grey rules.....only Ororo is better! Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 01-11-08 - 03:41 pm Title: Three
Man, Kitty and Bobby are starting to work Marie's last nerve, and mine! Sheesh!
This was an excellent chapter. I like what you've done with Emma, as Scott's former flame and a prized pupil to Charles. Definitely different than stories with her I've seen before. I also love Ororo's walk of shame. Classic.
Author's Response: That was my favorite things. As soon as i had her walk out that door to go on the date with Forge, I instantly knew that she had to do a walk of shame...I needed a walk of shame.
[Report This]Date: 01-10-08 - 09:11 am Title: Chapter One
Uhm, i honestly don't think Logan would know the name of Emmas parfume, but aside that, not bad.
Author's Response: I know Logan wouldn't but i wanted to invoke the idea of it being expensive, only the best for Emma ya know!
[Report This]Date: 01-08-08 - 07:24 am Title: Chapter One
Ororo and Forge, Logan and Emma, that alone says oodles and oodles of drama yay! I look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: I love drama...its a dish served hot.
[Report This]Date: 01-05-08 - 03:21 am Title: Chapter One
I like Logan's eyebrow.
Emma always makes any fic with Ororo more fun. They're such polar opposites. Funny how he likes Emma's perfume but not Forge's Old Spice.
You've made Logan very likable in this story.
These two sentences threw me.
Marie took a deep breath, she promised her self that she would not pummel the younger mutant girl. “Your right, Kitty.”
The younger girl looked caught off guard. “Bobby and me have been through worst.” She turned and left the room.
It was hard to tell if it was Rogue saying she and Bobby had been through the worst. You could say "Kitty looked caught off-guard." Makes it clearer, and it doesn't repeat "younger girl," since you already have "younger mutant" in the sentence before it.
Author's Response: At this point i'm to lazy to fix this, but i'm glad you said something. Other's would have just read right over it and never said anything about word choice.
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