

Date: 05-25-08 - 02:04 am Title: Chapter Five
I'm enjoying this story. I like Alpha Flight every now and again, particularly crossovers with X-Men like the old annuals. Obviously, I can't wait for Jean-Paul to show up.
Reading this is like watching an episode of Voyager, and Forge is definitely one of the people you expect to walk around with a tricorder, or - don't throw anything at me - to program the holodeck. Reminds me of his Aerie penthouse. Those were the days...
I want to see more Logan in this, when you get a chance.

Date: 05-24-08 - 06:34 pm Title: Chapter Five
i honestly wish the chapters were longer. The lower i scroll I think "please don't let this be the end of the chapter yet". I really look forward to this story every weekend/ every other weekend (however often you update).
I hope there's a lot more Storm... Ro/Lo soon. Jubilee too. I like Rem/Rog too but they're right behind Scott/Jean on my Overdone list.

Date: 05-04-08 - 09:25 pm Title: Chapter Three
I like the banter you have in this story so far.

Date: 05-02-08 - 09:34 pm Title: Chapter Three
Good chapter. I really liked the conversation between Wolvie and Jubes at the end.

Date: 05-02-08 - 05:15 pm Title: Chapter Three
u hav a great fic here the iceman pov is interesting he can be a forgotten xman cause noone seems to know quite what to do with him. ur've pulled it off well :)
keep up the great writing look forward to seeing more soon :)
cheers joe

Date: 04-24-08 - 05:17 pm Title: Chapter Two
Good chapter. I loved the dialog between Jubes and Bobby. I can't wait to see how the X-Men escape. More RoLo please.

Date: 04-23-08 - 09:05 pm Title: Chapter Two
After your last series, i'm sure this is going to be an emotional roller coaster. Already got goosebumps.

Date: 04-19-08 - 02:22 am Title: Chapter One
I don't know if I ever reviewed this.
I love Bobby. Bit wordy on his narrative; he explains himself a lot, but that's fine for a first chapter. And I LOVE Northstar, so I can't wait to see what you bring to the table between these two. Thing is, his frank talk of his love life almost overshadows the RoLo in this story, but what we saw of it was still good.
This was funny, easy to read and well written. More, please.
Author's Response: Just wanted to thank you for the review of my fic "Parallels". I appreciate it. I do promise RoLo in this fic, but it will develop slowly and there will be lots of other characters and pairings as well. But again, thanks for reading and reviewing!

Date: 04-18-08 - 08:24 pm Title: Chapter One
Hmmm... FOH in charge, Rouge keeping a supply of inhibitor collars, Jean being pregnant in a society that "forbids it", Bobby/Northstar, it all sounds intriguing. Can't wait to see what happens : )
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!