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Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-16-08 - 11:53 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

Bobby moonlighting as a waiter, that's cute. Nice of the Professor to check up on Jean-Paul. I can't wait to see how this develops. Interesting drama going on with Jubilee.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-05-08 - 03:38 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

Poor Jubes! Logan is the closest thing she had to a father, and now that relationship is damaged. I really hope that it can be repaired!

I think Logan needs to go ahead and tell 'Ro how he feels. She may be holding back because she thinks that's what he wants. Logan was never one for PDA, and maybe she thinks she's acting how he wants her to act.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-27-08 - 10:08 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

Great update. I really like the way the story is progressing. You express each character so well, and that is what keeps me going.

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-24-08 - 04:47 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

strangely enough, I want a Hank/Piotr hookup. I don't know why.

I love Moonstar in pretty much anything, so I'm glad to see her here.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-06-08 - 01:39 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

I'm over here giggling about Jean's labor. She was far too calm! Yes, she put the pain in the box, but most women would be sweating and hysterical and squeezing their husband/birth coach's hand off. Maybe Haven's atmosphere had some Demerol wafting through it to keep her relaxed...never mind, just me being silly.

As usual, I like Bobby and Jean-Paul. Logan's starting to grow on me. Ororo should eventually make him a little gift too, a gesture that touches him. Jubilee used to ride roller blades in the comics; I don't remember her riding a skateboard, but I may have missed something.

Scott refers to Jean's episode as the Phoenix "the Phoenix saga?" That's funny. Most couples have the seven year itch, the Summers' have a "saga,"

I'm enjoying this.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-05-08 - 08:36 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

I can't believe Angel left!!!!

Reviewer: Onyx Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-05-08 - 05:28 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

Good update : )

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-28-08 - 06:24 am Title: Chapter Eleven

Loved the girl chat. It good to see that the X-women can talk about anything together.

James is a selfish asshole.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-28-08 - 06:15 am Title: Chapter Ten

Loved the condom talk bw Bobby and Hank. Their friendship is wonderful.

Jubes is so cute in her exploration into the world of sex.

James is a jerk. His wife is pregnant and he treats her like shit. Must he always be in control of everything.

Forge better watch out. I can see him causing trouble for 'Ro and Logan in the future.

Loved the dialog bw Bobby and Jean Paul, and 'Ro and Logan.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-06-08 - 04:55 pm Title: Chapter Nine

I really don't miss the RoLo in this chapter because I'm enjoying the exchanges between Jean Paul and Bobby. It'd be cool if you'd post a story just with those two on a different site.

Good work tying in the Alpha Flight history in this fic. Jean Paul having an adopted daughter is one of those details that most readers don't remember or mention too often, that and Logan having a previous attraction to Heather. I'm enjoying the tone of this story, even though the pace of the action slowed down a bit over the past chapter or two. It's good to see them having decent down time, though. Jean Paul ducking in to get a tray and ducking right back out had me in chuckles.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-25-08 - 10:39 am Title: Chapter Eight

I feel so sorry for the single guys. They seem so depressed that they are not enough women.

Poor 'Ro, but I can't blame her for being jealous. Jean and Heather do have similar features and I would question Logan's attraction to me too if I looked nothing like what he usually goes for.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-17-08 - 10:30 pm Title: Chapter Seven

I love that all the single guys are sexual frustrated. It's not funny, but then again it is. I like the rate that RoLo's relationship is developing, especially the fact that they know when to give each other space.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-07-08 - 07:20 pm Title: Chapter Six

Great ROLO scene. Loved Bobby and Hank discussion on sex. It good to see someone write Hank as a person with normal desires outside of knowledge.

Reviewer: Stormcrow Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-25-08 - 02:55 pm Title: Chapter Five

i like thecr star trek & Xmen keep it up

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-25-08 - 11:41 am Title: Chapter Five

Poor Forge, rejection is hard. The ratio of guys to gals seems like it should cause some problems in the future, but hopefully things will work out. It's so cute how Remy and Rogue take advantage of every opportunity to be alone.

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