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Reviewer: Nienna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-27-08 - 12:16 am Title: Chapter 4

that's what I thought was wrong w/her but who was she with & why does this story feel so familiar? Did you put this on ffnet?

Author's Response: Yes, I actually do have this posted on ff.net, it's probably where you read it. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: Nienna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-27-08 - 12:14 am Title: Chapter 3

Yea that was hella short & even tho I like short chapts more this was way too short but only cause I want to find out what's going on.

Reviewer: Nienna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-27-08 - 12:12 am Title: Chapter 2

At least this time he was more concerned.

Reviewer: Nienna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-27-08 - 12:09 am Title: Chapter 1

I really want to know what's going on! Logan was all concerned calling her baby & sweetheart & then he's all into getting his drink on like he doesn't care so what's up?

Reviewer: BlueEyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-22-08 - 11:05 am Title: Chapter 4

Love it I am looking forward to the next chapter I hope that Ororo tells Logan soon.

Reviewer: bringirl2001 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-21-08 - 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 4

I hopeyou will update soon- this is getting really interesting and i can't wait until logan finds out- teehe

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-31-08 - 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 2

not bad keep it up.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-29-08 - 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 2

Okay, I want to see what happens next. It's nice to see Scott and Jean happily married with a kid for a change, instead of the usual theatrics of Jean chasing Logan or vice versa. I smiled when Logan was carrying Logan in his arms.

Reviewer: Lady Ororo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-28-08 - 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 2

wow wow wow!!!!
Very very promising!! ^ can't wait to see what will happens! *_*
Good job so far!! I'm really enjoing it! ^^
kiss!!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-28-08 - 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 2

wow wow wow!!!!
Very very promising!! ^ can't wait to see what will happens! *_*
Good job so far!! I'm really enjoing it! ^^
kiss!!!

Reviewer: Dragn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-22-08 - 10:47 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!

Reviewer: Fri Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-21-08 - 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

coolio man i hope nothings wrong with the maybe baby. . . i like it. I'm going to be waiting for the next chap of this.

Reviewer: kayjin927 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-21-08 - 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

Could she perhaps be.... Nice story, haven't seen one like it in a while, hope it turns out to be all that you want it to be

Author's Response: Hehehe!! You'll just have to wait and see! LOL!! Thank you so very much for reading and reviewing! It is really appreciated!!! I'm glad you really liked the story! Stay Tuned! =]

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-21-08 - 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

uh-oh... something's going on with 'Ro. Can't wait to see what happens next. There are a few grammatical goofs, but not so many as to ruin my enjoyment of this story. Couple of little easy fixes:

“Fine ‘Ro, I promise I say anything about this to anyone.” This needs "won't" before "say." And this:

Instinct told him to first check it she had a pulse, and was greatly relieved when he had found one.

Make it "Instinct told him to first check if she had a pulse, and he was greatly relieved when he found one.

Anyway, no more nagging from me. Write us some more, please!

Author's Response: Ahh! Thanks! I completely missed those! Thank you soo much for pointing them out! I tend to just completely miss them sometimes! Thank you for also taking the time to read and review! It is greatly appreciated! =]

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